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When a car accident leads a young couple into their nightmares to an accursed clinic, aborting a foetus demon means life or death to whoever wakes up first.
I am unable to make sense of the story. "leads.. into their nightmares" -- does that mean both of them are unconscious after the accident? "means life or death to whoever wakes up first".? So ... whoever wakes up 1st lives or dies? "aborting a foetus demon"? -- and if it's not aborted, what are theRead more
I am unable to make sense of the story. “leads.. into their nightmares” — does that mean both of them are unconscious after the accident?
See less“means life or death to whoever wakes up first”.? So … whoever wakes up 1st lives or dies?
“aborting a foetus demon”? — and if it’s not aborted, what are the consequences, the stakes?? Do both parents die? Just the mother?
DIRTY LAUNDRY: Under the influence of her new washing machine, a shy single woman seeks pleasure in her dirtiest fantasies while dreaming of having a family.
Thanks for the feedback?! I have a full outline for this one and 2/3 of the script (70 pages) - I just need a full week end to close the first draft. it is an existential horror in the mood of Haneke movies, there will be a descent into hell?for the main character, there will be blood and killings,Read more
Thanks for the feedback?!
I have a full outline for this one and 2/3 of the script (70 pages) – I just need a full week end to close the first draft.
it is an existential horror in the mood of Haneke movies, there will be a descent into hell?for the main character, there will be blood and killings, but most of the movie is just a psychological drama so I decided not to stress the horror element in the logline.
The relationship between the main character and the machine is an intimate one, something like?the love for the car in “Christine”; the laundromat would be more appropriate for another movie?I can see where it may go.
There will be some funny scenes at the beginning for exemple a mad plumber who sells the machine, but the main mood is drama.
I’ll watch Click! I was thinkin more about L.A.Story where Steve Martin talks to a freeway sign.
See lessAfter a werewolf slaughters the family of a pregnant newlywed, she learns a Grimm ancestral secret and becomes a cold-hearted huntress while investigating who stalks her.
This premise has much potential. Best to remove "...while investigating who stalks her." because this is a secondary goal which subsequently dilutes the primary goal of hunting the Werewolf. Hope this helps.
This premise has much potential.
Best to remove “…while investigating who stalks her.” because this is a secondary goal which subsequently dilutes the primary goal of hunting the Werewolf.
Hope this helps.
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