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An insecure prison doctor cooks up misfortune for inmates when she discovers a desire to care for burn victims.
The doctor will need at least one redeeming characteristic because other wise she is a nasty person with no clear motivation other wise give her a noble reason perhaps she is experimenting to find a miracle burns treatment. Hope this helps.
The doctor will need at least one redeeming characteristic because other wise she is a nasty person with no clear motivation other wise give her a noble reason perhaps she is experimenting to find a miracle burns treatment.
Hope this helps.
See lessWhen a lonely woman get bitten by a mysterious werewolf one late night she needs to find the person who did it to find out how to break the spell before she herself turns into a monster.
I agree about cutting "mysterious": it means nothing. I would cut "one late night" too because it's not relevant to the plot. I would cut "the person", in a logline the shorter the better.
I agree about cutting “mysterious”: it means nothing.
See lessI would cut “one late night” too because it’s not relevant to the plot.
I would cut “the person”, in a logline the shorter the better.
When a car accident leads a young couple into their nightmares to an accursed clinic, aborting a foetus demon means life or death to whoever wakes up first.
I am unable to make sense of the story. "leads.. into their nightmares" -- does that mean both of them are unconscious after the accident? "means life or death to whoever wakes up first".? So ... whoever wakes up 1st lives or dies? "aborting a foetus demon"? -- and if it's not aborted, what are theRead more
I am unable to make sense of the story. “leads.. into their nightmares” — does that mean both of them are unconscious after the accident?
See less“means life or death to whoever wakes up first”.? So … whoever wakes up 1st lives or dies?
“aborting a foetus demon”? — and if it’s not aborted, what are the consequences, the stakes?? Do both parents die? Just the mother?