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An? wheelchair-bound college girl must use her physical abilities and mental acumen to save her trapped friends from zombies who have surrounded their cottage.
I get this wheelchair-bound character it helps to ramp up the primal fear factor, but in horror movies remember evil is the star. That is what folks are paying to see. If you want a story where your wheelchair-bound character prevails e.g. ?girl must use her physical abilities and mental acumen to sRead more
I get this wheelchair-bound character it helps to ramp up the primal fear factor, but in horror movies remember evil is the star. That is what folks are paying to see. If you want a story where your wheelchair-bound character prevails e.g. ?girl must use her physical abilities and mental acumen to save? shoot for a Thriller or in this case Thriller-horror mashup.
Curious to know if you are going to rewrite based on the coverage you received.
If so, I would pay to see the following ?
Take care.
See lessA selfish party-animal on a fast track to nowhere decides to volunteer at the children?s hospital to win back his ex-girlfriend. But when the children in his care turn into flesh-eating demons, he dives in the thick of an invasion to save her, joining a group of proper do-gooders as they search for survivors.
I've commented on your previous one. In future, try to keep it all within one post. It's easier for other users to see the evolution of your logline. What I do is update the main one and put a "1st version" in the comments. You could always boost it then if you wanted.
I’ve commented on your previous one. In future, try to keep it all within one post. It’s easier for other users to see the evolution of your logline. What I do is update the main one and put a “1st version” in the comments. You could always boost it then if you wanted.
See lessA selfish party-animal on a fast track to nowhere decides to volunteer at the children?s hospital to win back his ex-girlfriend. But when the children in his care turn into flesh-eating demons, he dives in the thick of an invasion to save her, joining a group of proper do-gooders as they search for survivors. ? 1st version A newly reformed party animal sets out to rescue his ex-girlfriend when demons invade his small town.
Is he an ex party animal? This is basically 'Shaun of the Dead' but with demons instead of zombies. What are the demons after? What's their MO? I think that's really important to understanding this plot because that could give us a clue to the challenges he's facing and why. It doesn't sound too comRead more
Is he an ex party animal?
This is basically ‘Shaun of the Dead’ but with demons instead of zombies. What are the demons after? What’s their MO? I think that’s really important to understanding this plot because that could give us a clue to the challenges he’s facing and why. It doesn’t sound too complicated at the moment so I think a little more detail is needed to make the reader understand how it’s going to fill a 90min+ runtime.
What’s this guy’s arc? Sounds like he’s already arced before the opening credits so where does he go next?
Why this guy? Why do we want him to succeed?
Hope this helps. Interested to see where this goes.
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