1. Posted: May 25, 2020In:

    A selfish party-animal on a fast track to nowhere decides to volunteer at the children?s hospital to win back his ex-girlfriend. But when the children in his care turn into flesh-eating demons, he dives in the thick of an invasion to save her, joining a group of proper do-gooders as they search for survivors. ? 1st version A newly reformed party animal sets out to rescue his ex-girlfriend when demons invade his small town.

    Mike Pedley Singularity

    Is he an ex party animal? This is basically 'Shaun of the Dead' but with demons instead of zombies. What are the demons after? What's their MO? I think that's really important to understanding this plot because that could give us a clue to the challenges he's facing and why. It doesn't sound too comRead more

    Is he an ex party animal?

    This is basically ‘Shaun of the Dead’ but with demons instead of zombies. What are the demons after? What’s their MO? I think that’s really important to understanding this plot because that could give us a clue to the challenges he’s facing and why. It doesn’t sound too complicated at the moment so I think a little more detail is needed to make the reader understand how it’s going to fill a 90min+ runtime.

    What’s this guy’s arc? Sounds like he’s already arced before the opening credits so where does he go next?

    Why this guy? Why do we want him to succeed?

    Hope this helps. Interested to see where this goes.

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  2. Posted: May 21, 2020In:

    An insecure wheelchair-bound college girl spends the weekend at a cottage with friends where they are attacked by zombies. They don’t know why until she discovers that the zombies were all murder victims of her friends – and she was next.

    Michael Fine Logliner

    I agree about the active goal, but the main point of the movie is a disabled girl overcoming her physical disability and emotional insecurity to save her friends (and ultimately herself!) The zombies ending up as the "good guys" is collateral benefit.

    I agree about the active goal, but the main point of the movie is a disabled girl overcoming her physical disability and emotional insecurity to save her friends (and ultimately herself!) The zombies ending up as the “good guys” is collateral benefit.

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  3. Posted: April 9, 2020In:

    With the help of his undead lost love, a reluctant store manager must return to the island where she was slain to prevent the escape of a primitive evil before the anniversary of her death.

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    Jonathon Nicholas Penpusher

    Hi Odie,   i actually love this premise. its a refreshing and interesting take on the classic horror movie.   for me, these would be my questions to ask:   Why does he love her? What is unique about their relationship? Why is he reluctant? what is it that is making him doubt his decisRead more

    Hi Odie,

     

    i actually love this premise. its a refreshing and interesting take on the classic horror movie.

     

    for me, these would be my questions to ask:

     

    • Why does he love her? What is unique about their relationship?
    • Why is he reluctant? what is it that is making him doubt his decision to go back? that seems like something you could flesh out?
    • Can you make the primitive email somehow connected to their relationships, so what i mean is, its something connected to their past, which is why they’re being haunted?

     

    Overall, i actually really liked it, and would watch that movie.

     

    cheers.

    Jonathon

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