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A selfish party-animal on a fast track to nowhere decides to volunteer at the children?s hospital to win back his ex-girlfriend. But when the children in his care turn into flesh-eating demons, he dives in the thick of an invasion to save her, joining a group of proper do-gooders as they search for survivors.
I've commented on your previous one. In future, try to keep it all within one post. It's easier for other users to see the evolution of your logline. What I do is update the main one and put a "1st version" in the comments. You could always boost it then if you wanted.
I’ve commented on your previous one. In future, try to keep it all within one post. It’s easier for other users to see the evolution of your logline. What I do is update the main one and put a “1st version” in the comments. You could always boost it then if you wanted.
See lessA selfish party-animal on a fast track to nowhere decides to volunteer at the children?s hospital to win back his ex-girlfriend. But when the children in his care turn into flesh-eating demons, he dives in the thick of an invasion to save her, joining a group of proper do-gooders as they search for survivors. ? 1st version A newly reformed party animal sets out to rescue his ex-girlfriend when demons invade his small town.
Is he an ex party animal? This is basically 'Shaun of the Dead' but with demons instead of zombies. What are the demons after? What's their MO? I think that's really important to understanding this plot because that could give us a clue to the challenges he's facing and why. It doesn't sound too comRead more
Is he an ex party animal?
This is basically ‘Shaun of the Dead’ but with demons instead of zombies. What are the demons after? What’s their MO? I think that’s really important to understanding this plot because that could give us a clue to the challenges he’s facing and why. It doesn’t sound too complicated at the moment so I think a little more detail is needed to make the reader understand how it’s going to fill a 90min+ runtime.
What’s this guy’s arc? Sounds like he’s already arced before the opening credits so where does he go next?
Why this guy? Why do we want him to succeed?
Hope this helps. Interested to see where this goes.
See lessAn insecure wheelchair-bound college girl spends the weekend at a cottage with friends where they are attacked by zombies. They don’t know why until she discovers that the zombies were all murder victims of her friends – and she was next.
I agree about the active goal, but the main point of the movie is a disabled girl overcoming her physical disability and emotional insecurity to save her friends (and ultimately herself!) The zombies ending up as the "good guys" is collateral benefit.
I agree about the active goal, but the main point of the movie is a disabled girl overcoming her physical disability and emotional insecurity to save her friends (and ultimately herself!) The zombies ending up as the “good guys” is collateral benefit.
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