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  1. Posted: April 1, 2020In: Horror

    Two bickering sisters give into a malicious doll entity in return for success and fortune, however failure to provide another victim leads to fatal consequences.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 4, 2020 at 3:02 am

    I can see your story, but all the other sacrifice movies start to muddy the waters. If ?failure to provide another victim? means a story about the two bickering sisters trying to off the other to get the lucky charm from a doll ? that?s when it starts getting interesting.

    I can see your story, but all the other sacrifice movies start to muddy the waters. If ?failure to provide another victim? means a story about the two bickering sisters trying to off the other to get the lucky charm from a doll ? that?s when it starts getting interesting.

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  2. Posted: March 29, 2020In: Horror

    A lonely young woman with Asperger’s syndrome become friends with seven cats only to find out that are possessed killing machines.

    Guy Man Logliner
    Added an answer on March 29, 2020 at 8:29 pm

    The plot of the movie isn't clear. I'm guessing the goal is to rid the cats of the evil influence before they kill someone or get killed by someone who's trying to defend themselves. But how is she going to achieve it? Presuming that the character's weakness is that she has social anxiety and is afrRead more

    The plot of the movie isn’t clear. I’m guessing the goal is to rid the cats of the evil influence before they kill someone or get killed by someone who’s trying to defend themselves. But how is she going to achieve it?

    Presuming that the character’s weakness is that she has social anxiety and is afraid of interacting with people because it will expose her as socially deficient, maybe the plot could be something that forces her to interact with people. So the only way to save the cats and their potential victims is by approaching strangers and talking to them.

    Including a central antagonist could work. Maybe it’s a lonely middle aged man who is using the cats to murder seven of his friends who don’t talk to him any more and he feels abandoned.

    What if it’s on New Years Eve? Lonely people feel even lonelier when everybody around them is busy partying and celebrating with other people. So the woman with social anxiety might have to hunt for the villain who derives power from being around people. As midnight grows nearer, maybe he moves to bigger and wilder parties, so the heroine will have to become even more uninhibited to get to him.

    The exact ideas here aren’t prescriptive, but definitely think about how the character’s weakness is conflicting with the plot of the story.

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  3. Posted: March 26, 2020In: Horror

    A teenage rebellion girl(18) accepts her friend?s $500 challenge to stay alone all overnight in the graveyard and experience series of fearful activities but an abnormal force cannot let her escape from graveyard.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 28, 2020 at 1:02 am

    Here is an attempt, see how you like it. "When a paranormal force traps her in a graveyard, a highschooler spending the night on a dare must discover the secret to banishing the malevolent entity if she is to escape by morning."

    Here is an attempt, see how you like it.

    “When a paranormal force traps her in a graveyard, a highschooler spending the night on a dare must discover the secret to banishing the malevolent entity if she is to escape by morning.”

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