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A teenage rebellion girl(18) accepts her friend?s $500 challenge to stay alone all overnight in the graveyard and experience series of fearful activities but an abnormal force cannot let her escape from graveyard.
Here is an attempt, see how you like it. "When a paranormal force traps her in a graveyard, a highschooler spending the night on a dare must discover the secret to banishing the malevolent entity if she is to escape by morning."
Here is an attempt, see how you like it.
“When a paranormal force traps her in a graveyard, a highschooler spending the night on a dare must discover the secret to banishing the malevolent entity if she is to escape by morning.”
See lessAn unsuccessful & frustrated young screenwriter search for ghosts to get inspired for writing horror screenplay as a final attempt
There is something interesting about your premise, but be warned - there are very few films about screenwriters that ever get made. Why? Probably because very few people can identify with the struggles of a screenwriter. Most people hardly even know what we do exactly. Having said that, if you do goRead more
There is something interesting about your premise, but be warned – there are very few films about screenwriters that ever get made. Why? Probably because very few people can identify with the struggles of a screenwriter. Most people hardly even know what we do exactly.
Having said that, if you do go through with this story, I would suggest introducing a strong inciting incident. Maybe something like Jumanji or Beatlejuice, e.g., your struggling horror writer could organize a seance in the old house. That would make them a more active hero. The ghost/s turn up, the writer gets his inspiration for a million-dollar story, but now the ghosts turn on him, and he can only reap his reward if he can escape the ghosts and get out of the house.
See lessA young man accepts the body switch offered from a cult member in order to start a run away from his pregnant girlfriend and start a new life. Little did he knows that the new body requires constant supplies of human hearts. Meanwhile, his old body replaced him at home as cult members have their own plans with his girlfriend.
learning that ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? he must his new body needs a? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?go ask to be returned fresh supply of blood? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?to his old self the cult members have their? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?save heRead more
learning that ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? he must
fresh supply of blood? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?to his old self
own plans with his girlfriend
the first set of inciting incident -> objective goal is what I suggest you go for in the logline-
After realizing that his new body requires an endless supply of fresh blood, a man must seek out the operators to reclaim his old body (25 Words)
The through line with his girlfriend becomes an added complication, to the fact that the cult members are not interested in the re-switch, which is all pretty good for the script,
See lessbut makes the logline harder to read- Returning to reclaim his old body, when a young man learns that his operators are trying to sacrifice his girlfriend, a commitment-phobic man must save her (27 Words) (not recommended)