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When a desperate PTSD sufferer is sent to an experimental therapy centre, she finds herself fighting for her life against the twisted therapists who by prey on their patients? worst fears to increase the adrenaline in their ?meat? and satisfy their cannibalistic hunger.
A better way to word this would be: "When she is sent to new mental health facility, an emotional vulnerable woman must escape before she falls prey to the twisted cannibalistic therapists who use her worst fears against her". This sounds like grindhouse-style exploitation more than traditional horrRead more
A better way to word this would be:
“When she is sent to new mental health facility, an emotional vulnerable woman must escape before she falls prey to the twisted cannibalistic therapists who use her worst fears against her”.
This sounds like grindhouse-style exploitation more than traditional horror. There have been quite a few stories partaining to “patients sent to an asylum of horror”. What’s different about this concept? Could the reason for their PTSD relate to the plot? Perhaps she is a veteran of war?
See lessWhen introverted twins experiences racially motivated harassment from their white classmates and one is sexually assaulted by their school counselor, the twins seeks revenge by hunting everyone who mistreated them.
Agree with points made above- the first thing that came to my mind was how to get one MC with twins- perhaps they could be twins but of different race (this can happen!)- adds a twist to the racial drama that was mentioned above? If the racial abuse is commonplace from the outset of the movie, it woRead more
Agree with points made above- the first thing that came to my mind was how to get one MC with twins- perhaps they could be twins but of different race (this can happen!)- adds a twist to the racial drama that was mentioned above?
If the racial abuse is commonplace from the outset of the movie, it would make sense to have the sexual assault be the inciting event- perhaps from the only person they thought they could trust- the school counselor.
See lessIntroverted twins move to a new town where they endure (racially motivated) harassment; one finally decided to fight back.
You should give a face to the bad guy. A specific bad guy that is a focal point for the reader.It doesn't mean this character is the only one harassing the twins, it just means he is the lead instigator or main Harasser.
You should give a face to the bad guy. A specific bad guy that is a focal point for the reader.
It doesn’t mean this character is the only one harassing the twins, it just means he is the lead instigator or main Harasser.
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