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  1. Posted: January 8, 2020In: Horror

    Introverted twins move to a new town where they endure (racially motivated) harassment; one finally decided to fight back.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on January 9, 2020 at 10:22 am

    You should give a face to the bad guy. A specific bad guy that is a focal point for the reader.It doesn't mean this character is the only one harassing the twins, it just means he is the lead instigator or main Harasser.

    You should give a face to the bad guy. A specific bad guy that is a focal point for the reader.

    It doesn’t mean this character is the only one harassing the twins, it just means he is the lead instigator or main Harasser.

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  2. Posted: December 31, 2019In: Horror

    An insecure wheelchair-bound girl must learn to rely on her physical abilities and wits as she becomes her friends’ only hope to save them from a pack of zombies.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on January 7, 2020 at 9:02 pm

    Possible title: Dead Weight What is actually this girl's disability? I think in order to understand the situation this is important. It is the one thing that determines how much she is physically able to do. Without this "rely on her physical abilities" means nothing as we don't know what she's capaRead more

    Possible title: Dead Weight

    What is actually this girl’s disability? I think in order to understand the situation this is important. It is the one thing that determines how much she is physically able to do. Without this “rely on her physical abilities” means nothing as we don’t know what she’s capable of. FWIW, I think if she has full use of her upper body but can’t use her legs it would work really well. Everyone makes jokes about how easy it is to outrun zombies (Romero zombies – lurchers) and she’s at a sort of advantage having wheels but only on the flat or downhill and only while she has her wheelchair. The “all is lost” bit is dead easy – she loses her wheelchair… or even her legs completely…?

    I’m guessing this is about a girl learning to not be defined by her disability? Is she acting on her own the whole film? I feel like she needs someone to talk to?

    What’s the inciting incident that kicks off the plot? What happens that means she MUST go and save them? Are there more zombies than the ones pinning her friends down? Is it a zombie apocalypse?

    I have the same questions as TrixieG in addition to these ones. I love a good zombie movie and I think this has potential. I think you may have to be careful in the portrayal of the protagonist though. I don’t think it’s a good idea for her to save them inspite of her disability. She needs to be the only one who can save them because of her disability.

    Hope this helps.

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  3. Posted: December 29, 2019In: Horror

    An insecure wheelchair-bound girl must use her physical skill to fend off a pack of zombies that have been brought to life to kill her and her friends.

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    Added an answer on December 30, 2019 at 5:15 am

    >>>use her physical skill Which is?? What mojo does she have that can possibly enable her to prevail in spite of her disability? >>brought to life to kill her and her friends. Who is the villain behind the scenes outsourcing the death of a handicapped woman to zombies?? And why, whatRead more

    >>>use her physical skill

    Which is?? What mojo does she have that can possibly enable her to prevail in spite of her disability?

    >>brought to life to kill her and her friends.

    Who is the villain behind the scenes outsourcing the death of a handicapped woman to zombies?? And why, what is his motivation?

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