1. Posted: November 25, 2019In:

    When bank robbers and their hostages run into backwoods cannibals, the bank robber is chained to the hostage, and when they escape, must work together whilst being hunted through unknown terrain.

    Richiev Singularity

    While I would have gone the other way with this one,? (Concentrated on the hostage's plight to save her daughter) I do think you were correct to stick to one main plot.(btw, the 'one bullet' plot point seems to be a hook, you might want to add that to the logline and try it on for size, you can alwaRead more

    While I would have gone the other way with this one,? (Concentrated on the hostage’s plight to save her daughter) I do think you were correct to stick to one main plot.

    (btw, the ‘one bullet’ plot point seems to be a hook, you might want to add that to the logline and try it on for size, you can always take it back out if you don’t like it)

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  2. Posted: November 25, 2019In:

    When an amnesia-ridden detective wakes up imprisoned in a mansion filled with vampires, and learns he is part of an ancient feasting ritual, he teams with other human prisoners to get out and stay alive till sunrise.

    thedarkhorse Samurai

    If I had to chop this down: When a P.I. wakes up imprisoned in a mansion filled with vampires, and learns he is part of an ancient feasting ritual, he teams with other human prisoners to get out - and stay alive till sunrise.  

    If I had to chop this down:

    When a P.I. wakes up imprisoned in a mansion filled with vampires, and learns he is part of an ancient feasting ritual, he teams with other human prisoners to get out – and stay alive till sunrise.

     

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  3. Posted: November 22, 2019In:

    During an unruly blizzard, a family is trapped in their house with a malevolent ghost who has their daughter, and given the choice – get out and live or look for their daughter and die.

    thedarkhorse Samurai

    Hi Lempicka. Yeah I need to work on this one.

    Hi Lempicka. Yeah I need to work on this one.

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