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The House A family of four moves into a house in a small town only to find out there is more that meets the eye, the house sucks people alive.
What does the phrase "the house sucks people alive" mean? Now that the family knows the house is haunted, what must they do and why must they do it? Try building your logline along the following skeleton: When a [adjective] family of four moves into an [adjective] house and finds it haunted by [whatRead more
What does the phrase “the house sucks people alive” mean?
Now that the family knows the house is haunted, what must they do and why must they do it?
Try building your logline along the following skeleton:
When a [adjective] family of four moves into an [adjective] house and finds it haunted by [whatever], they must [do something] before [something bad happens].
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See lessA hardcore gamer learns from mysterious rebels about the true nature of his horrific childhood and undergoes an initiation ritual to confront the little black monster that tormented him as a child … again.
Your description of the lead character seems misplaced and irrelevant, unless you specify that he meets the 'mysterious rebels' while playing one of his games online. Everything else is too confusing as to why it is all happening. What is this 'initiation ritual' exactly? Also, I want to know what tRead more
Your description of the lead character seems misplaced and irrelevant, unless you specify that he meets the ‘mysterious rebels’ while playing one of his games online. Everything else is too confusing as to why it is all happening. What is this ‘initiation ritual’ exactly? Also, I want to know what the ‘true nature of his horrific childhood’ is to get a better understanding of ‘the little black monser’. I would lose the ‘…again’ at the end.
See lessAn emotionally-detached Forest Ranger rescues a traumatized boy from an abandoned logging site and must fight for survival against prehistoric creatures that were awakened during deforestation.
It is really good. It plants a nice seed in my head and I already see images flourishing. I suggest that the main event is the appearance of the prehistoric creatures: "When a deforestation wakes a pack of prehistoric carnivours, an emotionally-detached Forest Ranger must fight for survival while prRead more
It is really good. It plants a nice seed in my head and I already see images flourishing.
I suggest that the main event is the appearance of the prehistoric creatures:
“When a deforestation wakes a pack of prehistoric carnivours, an emotionally-detached Forest Ranger must fight for survival while protecting a boy he has rescued.”
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