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  1. Posted: March 7, 2019In: Horror

    In order to save two missing girls, a cop must win a game of wits with the criminal who knows where they are or risk losing the girls to a dark demise. (Psychological Horror)

    Redshoes Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 8, 2019 at 3:01 pm

    I would suggest the 'game of wits' and the 'dark demise' need to be spelled out.

    I would suggest the ‘game of wits’ and the ‘dark demise’ need to be spelled out.

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  2. Posted: March 7, 2019In: Horror

    A Specialized Law Enforcement Group gets on a train to arrest an assassin, now they team up with the assassin to stop a runaway train infested with flesh eating demons before it crashes. (Revision 4)

    kokobin Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 7, 2019 at 9:33 pm

    A Specialized Law Enforcement Group --------------- The word you are looking for is a SWAT team. Special Weapons and Tactics team. A SWAT team boards a train to arrest an assassin, then teams up with the assassin to stop a runaway train infested with flesh-eating demons before it crashes. (RevisionRead more

    A Specialized Law Enforcement Group
    —————
    The word you are looking for is a SWAT team.
    Special Weapons and Tactics team.

    A SWAT team boards a train to arrest an assassin, then teams up with the assassin to stop a runaway train infested with flesh-eating demons before it crashes. (Revision 4)

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  3. Posted: March 5, 2019In: Horror

    The Leader of a Specialized Law Enforcement Group must save himself and his team on a uncontrolled, flesh eating demon infested train before it crashes and destroy everything on board. (Revision 3)

    kokobin Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 7, 2019 at 8:57 am

    The Leader of a Specialized Law Enforcement Group must save himself and his team on ------------ a ===================================== The correct phrasing should be: The Leader of a Specialized Law Enforcement Group must save himself and his team on an?uncontrolled, flesh-eating, demon-infested tRead more

    The Leader of a Specialized Law Enforcement Group must save himself and his team on
    ————
    a
    =====================================

    The correct phrasing should be:

    The Leader of a Specialized Law Enforcement Group must save himself and his team on an?uncontrolled, flesh-eating, demon-infested train before it crashes and destroy everything on board.

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