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A woman who has just escaped from her abusive husband and moved to an old apartment must defend her autistic child from an evil entity which he accidentally released after befriending the neighbor, a mysterious old man who claims to be a renowned magician.
There seems to be no direct cause and effect between the abusive husband and the rest of the story. Maybe I'm missing something, but it looks like that part can be cut from the logline. The inciting event seems to be the entity appearing for the first time. Is there a specific event in which the entRead more
There seems to be no direct cause and effect between the abusive husband and the rest of the story. Maybe I’m missing something, but it looks like that part can be cut from the logline. The inciting event seems to be the entity appearing for the first time. Is there a specific event in which the entity first does something to the boy?
See lessA semi-retired military contractor accepts a special recon job involving defected Allied and Enemy soldiers in the Middle-East, there, the PMCs uncover a ritualistic cult heralding the emergence of their colossal-sized Nephilim.
The potential is there.Another way to look at it is to consider when the Nephillim are revealed. The way the logline is now, it sounds like Act II is about preventing Act III, the emergence of the Nephillim. If so, that can be broken down into? the specific action with the cult. Or if at least one gRead more
The potential is there.
Another way to look at it is to consider when the Nephillim are revealed. The way the logline is now, it sounds like Act II is about preventing Act III, the emergence of the Nephillim. If so, that can be broken down into? the specific action with the cult. Or if at least one giant emerges to start Act II, then the logline needs to be adjusted for accuracy.
I assume there’s a corrupt angel involved and women being impregnated. (Makes me think the angel heads the cult or was somehow captured and the cult developed around it.) If so and they have a large role in the story, then include them in the logline as they would be some of the needed specifics. If no, then the logline should not leave open the natural assumption.
See lessIn order to save two missing girls, a cop must win a game of wits with the criminal who knows where they are or risk losing the girls to a dark demise. (Psychological Horror)
I would suggest the 'game of wits' and the 'dark demise' need to be spelled out.
I would suggest the ‘game of wits’ and the ‘dark demise’ need to be spelled out.
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