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A recovering corneal transplant patient returns home only to experience a terrifying chain of events forcing her to determine their paranormal origins before it’s too late.
Agreed with all the above, I'll add that her goal is missing. What MUST she do as a result of seeing paranormal stuff? And what kind of paranormal? Ghosts? Demons? Angles? Describing the type of things she sees will help specify the genre.
Agreed with all the above, I’ll add that her goal is missing. What MUST she do as a result of seeing paranormal stuff? And what kind of paranormal? Ghosts? Demons? Angles? Describing the type of things she sees will help specify the genre.
See lessLogline: A junior level cyber crimes investigator races against the clock to track down a sadistic online stalker before he strikes his next chosen victims, her family.
One more thing, saying there is a ticking clock is different than having a ticking clock You say the lead character 'races against the clock' which is good, a well done ticking clock can give the story a certain immediacy. However you should word it differently, you should say, the lead character onRead more
One more thing, saying there is a ticking clock is different than having a ticking clock
You say the lead character ‘races against the clock’ which is good, a well done ticking clock can give the story a certain immediacy.
However you should word it differently, you should say, the lead character only has ‘twenty-four hours’ (Or whatever the timeframe is in your story)
Telling us the specific amount of time instead of a more generic, ‘races against the clock’ will help the logline but without adding much to the word count.
See lessKidnapped and caged, ten people are going to be killed one at a time until they identify the two traitors in their group, which will secure their release.
I like the fact that you don't have one specific main character, I think that adds tension and mystery to the storyline and it's definitely something I would watch.
I like the fact that you don’t have one specific main character, I think that adds tension and mystery to the storyline and it’s definitely something I would watch.
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