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Logline: A junior level cyber crimes investigator races against the clock to track down a sadistic online stalker before he strikes his next chosen victims, her family.
One more thing, saying there is a ticking clock is different than having a ticking clock You say the lead character 'races against the clock' which is good, a well done ticking clock can give the story a certain immediacy. However you should word it differently, you should say, the lead character onRead more
One more thing, saying there is a ticking clock is different than having a ticking clock
You say the lead character ‘races against the clock’ which is good, a well done ticking clock can give the story a certain immediacy.
However you should word it differently, you should say, the lead character only has ‘twenty-four hours’ (Or whatever the timeframe is in your story)
Telling us the specific amount of time instead of a more generic, ‘races against the clock’ will help the logline but without adding much to the word count.
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I like the fact that you don't have one specific main character, I think that adds tension and mystery to the storyline and it's definitely something I would watch.
I like the fact that you don’t have one specific main character, I think that adds tension and mystery to the storyline and it’s definitely something I would watch.
See lessWhen a Major disappears after an skirmishes with enemy forces, a search and rescue is undertaken as a Rookie slowly uncovers the existence of a greater, more primal threat that evolves into a series of horrific encounters beyond their capabilities.
>>>as an ancient world adversary is uncoveredThat's the story hook and the inciting incident that kicks off the plot so it needs to be described more clearly.? ?What is so unique about the adversary that makes it of dramatic interest, that makes it worthy of being a "horrible" being in a hoRead more
>>>as an ancient world adversary is uncovered
That’s the story hook and the inciting incident that kicks off the plot so it needs to be described more clearly.? ?What is so unique about the adversary that makes it of dramatic interest, that makes it worthy of being a “horrible” being in a horror flick?
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