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As a gang-ravaged inner-city estate is torn apart by a feral beast that feeds on hate and violence, one man trying to renounce his brutal past, must make his way through the bone shattering carnage to find his daughter.
The phrasing here is very off-putting, as is the unnecessary punctuation and excessive use of adjectives. Try arranging it more like: The protagonist engages in this conflict with the antagonist because of these stakes. It looks like you have all those details, they just need to flow better to be moRead more
The phrasing here is very off-putting, as is the unnecessary punctuation and excessive use of adjectives. Try arranging it more like:
The protagonist engages in this conflict with the antagonist because of these stakes.
It looks like you have all those details, they just need to flow better to be more compelling.
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One more thing,? many times a writer will personalize the story for the main character. For instance, the person killed will be someone the lead character cares about Another way is the lead character is somehow implicated in the murder and thus must prove their innocence. Just curious?if in your stRead more
One more thing,? many times a writer will personalize the story for the main character.
For instance, the person killed will be someone the lead character cares about
Another way is the lead character is somehow implicated in the murder and thus must prove their innocence.
Just curious?if in your story there was a personal connection between the lead character the victims?
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Why a "professional sleeper" and not a visitor/customer?
Why a “professional sleeper” and not a visitor/customer?
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