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Working back late Halloween night, a small town teacher and some resentful students are terrorized in their own school by a masked killer.
"When she and the class mean girls are given detention for fighting, the school outcast and her?bullies must band together to escape the locked down the school when a masked killer begins taking them out one by one." ----------------------------------------- Possible title: Surviving Detention
“When she and the class mean girls are given detention for fighting, the school outcast and her?bullies must band together to escape the locked down the school when a masked killer begins taking them out one by one.”
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Possible title: Surviving Detention
After a near death accident leaves a man with the ability to see behind the veil, he soon finds his real mission is to stop a unique werewolf from tearing apart the veil and destroy reality.
After an accident leaves [John] clinging between life and death, he's mysteriously given special abilities to fight devious creatures behind the veil in order to save himself - and everyone else. My two cents. Story sounds very interesting.
After an accident leaves [John] clinging between life and death, he’s mysteriously given special abilities to fight devious creatures behind the veil in order to save himself – and everyone else.
My two cents. Story sounds very interesting.
See lessA brilliant DACA student is abducted to an island with four other people, all trying to escape until a violent mistake spirals out of control, revealing no one to be who they seem. She must figure out whom to trust and survive.
At 42 words this, much like your other loglines, is too long and it hides plot crucial details - check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more information on logline conventions. What is a DACA student? The fact I need to ask means it's the wrong description to use. It's best to only include pRead more
At 42 words this, much like your other loglines, is too long and it hides plot crucial details – check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more information on logline conventions.
What is a DACA student? The fact I need to ask means it’s the wrong description to use. It’s best to only include phrases, words, and acronyms that most decision makers can understand without Googling.
“…a violent mistake…” – this needs clarification, what exactly happens that is a violent mistake?
See less“…spirals out of control…” – what does this mean in practical terms?
“…must figure out whom to trust and survive…” – loglines are used to describe a plot which requires a goal not goals, so which of these is the primary goal for the MC. As survival holds greater stakes, I suggest you make that her goal. However, survival is rather generic and merely a preservation of the status quo, is there something else she can do that will give her a better outcome? For example, she could be made the leader and responsible for the lives of the rest of the characters.