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  1. Posted: July 31, 2022In: Horror

    A young couple discovers a mysterious toy box that kills anyone who makes a wish.

    sabrown Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 1, 2022 at 11:33 am

    I really like this premise but isn't there a movie like this called the Box? Or maybe Hellraiser?

    I really like this premise but isn’t there a movie like this called the Box? Or maybe Hellraiser?

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  2. Posted: July 15, 2022In: Horror

    A Japanese American young woman discovers deadly recordings of her parents who died unexpectedly.

    NisVinten Logliner
    Added an answer on July 16, 2022 at 9:23 pm

    Exciting… but it’s like you need the action. How does the tapes/recordings turn her life around. What is her quest…? Maybe continue this: After finding deadly recordings of her parents who died unexpectedly a Japanese Amarican woman… For example - seeks revenge - learns things about her past that foRead more

    Exciting… but it’s like you need the action. How does the tapes/recordings turn her life around. What is her quest…?

    Maybe continue this:

    After finding deadly recordings of her parents who died unexpectedly a Japanese Amarican woman…

    For example
    – seeks revenge
    – learns things about her past that forces her to change her life for good
    – discovers the president it the next target and has 24 hours to save his life..
    – tries to escape herself being killed

    You see?

    Good luck! 🙂

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  3. Posted: June 28, 2022In: Horror

    A blind boy who helps police identify and apprehend a possessed serial killer must now prove that he witnessed the crimes and convince the police that a demonic entity is the real culprit behind the recent homicides.

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    Philippe Le Miere Logliner
    Added an answer on July 1, 2022 at 6:48 am

    "blind boy" = protagonist "helps police identify and apprehend a possessed serial killer" = inciting incident "must prove he witnessed the crimes" = main character goal Seems the playfulness of this logline, might be the contrast of blindness vs. sight. How a blind individual's witness of a crime woRead more

    “blind boy” = protagonist
    “helps police identify and apprehend a possessed serial killer” = inciting incident
    “must prove he witnessed the crimes” = main character goal

    Seems the playfulness of this logline, might be the contrast of blindness vs. sight. How a blind individual’s witness of a crime would probably provide less useable evidence. But how this might link to a demonic entity, as the real homicide culprit, is the real challenge.

    An important quality of story, is for the audience to first empathise with the main character. Tell us a little about the boy, not just his blindness, but one or two words describing his psychology. Courageous, weak, adventurous, timid … these are relatable qualities. That determine how he might relate to inciting incident events. That affect how he might emotionally respond to main goal struggles.

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