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A young couple discovers a mysterious toy box that kills anyone who makes a wish.
I really like this premise but isn't there a movie like this called the Box? Or maybe Hellraiser?
I really like this premise but isn’t there a movie like this called the Box? Or maybe Hellraiser?
See lessA Japanese American young woman discovers deadly recordings of her parents who died unexpectedly.
Exciting… but it’s like you need the action. How does the tapes/recordings turn her life around. What is her quest…? Maybe continue this: After finding deadly recordings of her parents who died unexpectedly a Japanese Amarican woman… For example - seeks revenge - learns things about her past that foRead more
Exciting… but it’s like you need the action. How does the tapes/recordings turn her life around. What is her quest…?
Maybe continue this:
After finding deadly recordings of her parents who died unexpectedly a Japanese Amarican woman…
For example
– seeks revenge
– learns things about her past that forces her to change her life for good
– discovers the president it the next target and has 24 hours to save his life..
– tries to escape herself being killed
You see?
Good luck! 🙂
See lessA blind boy who helps police identify and apprehend a possessed serial killer must now prove that he witnessed the crimes and convince the police that a demonic entity is the real culprit behind the recent homicides.
"blind boy" = protagonist "helps police identify and apprehend a possessed serial killer" = inciting incident "must prove he witnessed the crimes" = main character goal Seems the playfulness of this logline, might be the contrast of blindness vs. sight. How a blind individual's witness of a crime woRead more
“blind boy” = protagonist
“helps police identify and apprehend a possessed serial killer” = inciting incident
“must prove he witnessed the crimes” = main character goal
Seems the playfulness of this logline, might be the contrast of blindness vs. sight. How a blind individual’s witness of a crime would probably provide less useable evidence. But how this might link to a demonic entity, as the real homicide culprit, is the real challenge.
An important quality of story, is for the audience to first empathise with the main character. Tell us a little about the boy, not just his blindness, but one or two words describing his psychology. Courageous, weak, adventurous, timid … these are relatable qualities. That determine how he might relate to inciting incident events. That affect how he might emotionally respond to main goal struggles.
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