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A young family experience supernatural happenings in their new home. After the family pet is butchered and the children have been attacked in their beds a non believer must play devils advocate to the deadly unseen evil by taking a life in order to save his families.
A father must save his family from a haunting in their home linked to a massacre that occurred years before. With one of the original victims surviving (INCITING INCIDENT?), the father, a non-believer, down on his luck and unable to afford to move away, must play devil?s advocate to the deadly unseeRead more
A father must save his family from a haunting in their home linked to a massacre that occurred years before. With one of the original victims surviving (INCITING INCIDENT?), the father, a non-believer, down on his luck and unable to afford to move away, must play devil?s advocate to the deadly unseen evil in order to? deliver the original life and save his family.
See lessA young doctor tries an untested vaccine to save her brother’s life which results in a virus that destroys the world as we know it. She now has to lead a group of young survivors to safety. Trying to avoid a world of infected people and scavengers, while being hunted by something they’ve never seen before.
Agreed with Richiev. I'll add that, the central conflict in the premise is vague. She leads them, they follow, and at some point, they all arrive at the 'safe place' - end of story. What's standing in their way? What's going to make their journey interesting? It's worth noting that post-apocalypse cRead more
Agreed with Richiev.
I’ll add that, the central conflict in the premise is vague. She leads them, they follow, and at some point, they all arrive at the ‘safe place’ – end of story. What’s standing in their way? What’s going to make their journey interesting?
It’s worth noting that post-apocalypse concepts have been done to death, in many formats and genres, what is it about this particular story that will make it stand out from the rest?
Don’t get me wrong, I think that post-apocalypse stories will always have an audience, but I think that such a story needs a unique ‘hook’ especially now day and age. Said hook may well be the nature or type of conflict they face on their journey.
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As variable well said.? And "The Shawshank Redemption" is a good example of an effective logline that lays out the general through line of the plot --?but not the details, not the plot twists.? And it doesn't give away the ending -- whether the protagonist succeeds or fails.
As variable well said.? And “The Shawshank Redemption” is a good example of an effective logline that lays out the general through line of the plot –?but not the details, not the plot twists.? And it doesn’t give away the ending — whether the protagonist succeeds or fails.
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