It’s a concept with a unique point of view. Like the others mentioned, people who are not familiar with LARPing are going to?feel immediately?confused. Unfortunately that includes potential producers. Why not make it a “fish out of water” story where the main character is just a normal person that gets?thrown into this world? You have the unexplained suicides which could be used as the stakes/antagonist. But you still need an inciting event. Why are we there and how did we get there? And why should we care? The “why should we care” is fixed by giving us an interesting character to root for: someone like us, clueless boring people who don’t know, or care very much, about LARPing.