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A relief party ventures into the mountains of California during the Gold Rush to find a group of missing argonauts only to be hunted by a terrible beast that guards the claim.
Who is the main character? And Argonauts seems out of place, what other description can you use? Miners? Prospectors? Why is it so important to him or her to find the group?Is the story about them finding the missing people or about them escaping/sruviving the beast?
Who is the main character?
And Argonauts seems out of place, what other description can you use? Miners? Prospectors?
Why is it so important to him or her to find the group?
Is the story about them finding the missing people or about them escaping/sruviving the beast?
See lessWhen, after being revived from a near drowning, a devout little girl is plagued by nightly visits from an evil dwarf-like creature, (22) her two disbelieving teen brothers must convince their terrified, and missing, African housekeeper to help them find a way to banish it. (44)
My ?take on the logline: After being revived from drowning, a devout little girl is plagued by nightly visits from an evil dwarf-like creature. In order to banish the creature, her two disbelieving twin brothers and the African housekeeper undergo a dangerous sacred ritual.
My ?take on the logline:
After being revived from drowning, a devout little girl is plagued by nightly visits from an evil dwarf-like creature. In order to banish the creature, her two disbelieving twin brothers and the African housekeeper undergo a dangerous sacred ritual.
See lessA relief party of argonauts is assembled to reestablish correspondence with a gold claim in the mountains of California where a terrible beast sentinels a vast fortune.
This will sound harsh. The logline is about your story not about you. You can write the crap out of a sentence but I don't know exactly what the story is about.
This will sound harsh. The logline is about your story not about you. You can write the crap out of a sentence but I don’t know exactly what the story is about.
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