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A rapidly spreading sickness causes a suicidal teenager to put aside her intentions to save her loved ones.
The re-writes are a machete when we need a scalpel. A troubled teen?must somehow help her family survive inside of a quarantine zone until the cure for a mysterious illness can be found. I don't see any reason to reveal that she is suicidal. If she is, fine. Have her deal with it inside of the storyRead more
The re-writes are a machete when we need a scalpel.
A troubled teen?must somehow help her family survive inside of a quarantine zone until the cure for a mysterious illness can be found.
I don’t see any reason to reveal that she is suicidal. If she is, fine. Have her deal with it inside of the story. Usually, in sci-fi stories like this, the MC has the cure lingering inside of their body somehow. If this is not the case here, I still fail to see how a teenager will save the day in the end, but hey, I hope the OP has figured it out somehow and this gets made.
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Djhasms, See the above response in your secondary post.
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See the above response in your secondary post.
See lessTrapped inside their family cottage, a group of detached siblings must battle a vengeful witch and break a centuries old curse on their family.
This sounds like a great horror premise, a containd genre film is what many producers are looking for, and this sounds like one. The logline, as mentioned above, does need some work though. You've mentioned multiple protagonists, which can be done but will work against you in the long run. You're faRead more
This sounds like a great horror premise, a containd genre film is what many producers are looking for, and this sounds like one. The logline, as mentioned above, does need some work though.
You’ve mentioned multiple protagonists, which can be done but will work against you in the long run. You’re far better off specifying one. Can you define one main character for the story? Can you define the event that starts the story for this character? Could it be that one of his or her siblings is killed by the witch? The subsequent goal could be to kill the witch and it needs to be specified in the logline as well.
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