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– With life beyond high school approaching, three best friends find themselves in an unexpected love triangle as the summer winds down.
Hi yoobui2, How about something like this as a template? Preparing for the adult life ahead of them, three high school graduates must deal with an unanticipated love triangle before summer winds up. I hope this helps
Hi yoobui2,
How about something like this as a template?
Preparing for the adult life ahead of them, three high school graduates must deal with an unanticipated love triangle before summer winds up.
I hope this helps
See less‘It’s just one of those jobs you never get round to’ replies a man at a police station when he hands in a lost wallet after twenty years. A soccer referee rekindles her pursuit of diamonds stolen by her father when the wallet reappears. Attain her goal or surrender to gaol?
A logline is a one-sentence summary of the plot. Your logline attempt is more of a scene than a plot. I would also avoid questions in a logline. "When her father's wallet reappears, a soccer referee rekindles her search for the diamonds he stole." You might also want to add something about who or whRead more
A logline is a one-sentence summary of the plot.
Your logline attempt is more of a scene than a plot.
I would also avoid questions in a logline.
“When her father’s wallet reappears, a soccer referee rekindles her search for the diamonds he stole.”
You might also want to add something about who or what is standing in the way of the lead character’s goal.
See lessWhen a stranger from his criminal past visits his support group, an ex-sicario priest must protect the people in his new life by reawakening old demons.
Hi The_CNI, May I ask who is your lead character? The priest? The stranger? The ex-sicario priest must protect the people in his new life from who/m? What is the relation of the support group with the ex-sicario priest? I propose you write your logline in simple words (without using any idioms or meRead more
Hi The_CNI,
May I ask who is your lead character? The priest? The stranger?
The ex-sicario priest must protect the people in his new life from who/m?
What is the relation of the support group with the ex-sicario priest?
I propose you write your logline in simple words (without using any idioms or metaphors) first. Then share it here so we can figure out the abstract concept. Then you will probably get more feedback.
I hope this helps
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