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In an effort to win souls, a street preacher must convince two boys to walk the literal narrow and difficult path to salvation.
Hi Assaf, is this closer to what you are aiming for? In an effort to increase his disciples, an evangelist preacher must convince two boys to walk the literal narrow and difficult path to salvation. Now, how else can you say this? "walk the literal narrow and difficult path to salvation" re-write anRead more
Hi Assaf,
is this closer to what you are aiming for?
In an effort to increase his disciples, an evangelist preacher must convince two boys to walk the literal narrow and difficult path to salvation.
Now, how else can you say this? “walk the literal narrow and difficult path to salvation”
re-write and we will see it then.
See lessWhile debating over trusting in skill vs. Trusting in luck, two teenaged friends engage in a quarterstaff duel to prove their philosophical viewpoints
Hi Assaf, Debating over skill vs. luck, two teenage friends engage in (I'm having difficulty understanding quarterstaff duel - What is it?) a duel to prove their philosophical viewpoints. Can you find a substitute for this terminology? I hope this helps
Hi Assaf,
Debating over skill vs. luck, two teenage friends engage in (I’m having difficulty understanding quarterstaff duel – What is it?) a duel to prove their philosophical viewpoints.
Can you find a substitute for this terminology?
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To make his life-long dream of becoming a detective a reality, an impulsive and excitable cop must escort a convict on his “Dead Man’s Day”, a day of chaperoned freedom for death row inmates before their execution. His calculated ward, though, will stop at nothing to avenge the man he was framed for killing.
Hi phatiusmcdoogal, Below is my understanding of your proposed logline: However, there are parts that are not clear (in terms of conflict). Is this close to what you are trying to say? To consolidate his position as a homicide detective, a sharp-witted cop must escort (escort where? from what? Why dRead more
Hi phatiusmcdoogal,
Below is my understanding of your proposed logline:
However, there are parts that are not clear (in terms of conflict).
Is this close to what you are trying to say?
To consolidate his position as a homicide detective, a sharp-witted cop must escort (escort where? from what? Why does the convict need escorting?) a death row inmate while his (calculated ward? What is that?) prosecutors are determined to avenge a man they claim he killed.
I hope this helps
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