1. Posted: May 16, 2022In:

    A pair of zealous philosophical teenagers translate their viewpoints into a series of quarterstaff duels, but the taste for violence threatens to turn their friendship and any rational argument into a mere animal lust to destroy each other.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi Assaf, I suggest you provide some context by writing a synopsis. Your proposed logline sounds like a logline translated from a different language into English. Let us know what the story is. I hope this helps.

    Hi Assaf,
    I suggest you provide some context by writing a synopsis. Your proposed logline sounds like a logline translated from a different language into English. Let us know what the story is.
    I hope this helps.

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  2. Posted: May 15, 2022In:

    The life story of the Queen of Historical Romance, Rosemary Rogers, from her lavish upbringing, to her impoverished midlife, to her catapult to fame and fortune in the 1970s and 1980s.

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    Hello ADDABAD, Memorialization of life and work of Rosemary Rogers dubbed as Queen of Historical Romance. I hope this helps

    Hello ADDABAD,

    Memorialization of life and work of Rosemary Rogers dubbed as Queen of Historical Romance.

    I hope this helps

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  3. Posted: July 15, 2022In:

    A Japanese American young woman discovers deadly recordings of her parents who died unexpectedly.

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    Exciting… but it’s like you need the action. How does the tapes/recordings turn her life around. What is her quest…? Maybe continue this: After finding deadly recordings of her parents who died unexpectedly a Japanese Amarican woman… For example - seeks revenge - learns things about her past that foRead more

    Exciting… but it’s like you need the action. How does the tapes/recordings turn her life around. What is her quest…?

    Maybe continue this:

    After finding deadly recordings of her parents who died unexpectedly a Japanese Amarican woman…

    For example
    – seeks revenge
    – learns things about her past that forces her to change her life for good
    – discovers the president it the next target and has 24 hours to save his life..
    – tries to escape herself being killed

    You see?

    Good luck! 🙂

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