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Year 2000 hopefuls are bystanders as life throws cruel blow that will determine their once thought perfect futures.
I love the premise but maybe try flipping the placements of some of the points, possibly: 'When life throws him a curveball, the 2000's hopeful must determine how to counter the cruel blow to save his perfect future' In saying that, I am unclear of what his perfect future is, nor do I know what theRead more
I love the premise but maybe try flipping the placements of some of the points, possibly:
‘When life throws him a curveball, the 2000’s hopeful must determine how to counter the cruel blow to save his perfect future’
In saying that, I am unclear of what his perfect future is, nor do I know what the cruel blow is.
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Maybe do some research into the technicalities of Buddhism as a way to defeat the bully, maybe as a subversion of the traditional pacifist Buddhist, he defeats the bully with cunning instead of moralising.
Maybe do some research into the technicalities of Buddhism as a way to defeat the bully, maybe as a subversion of the traditional pacifist Buddhist, he defeats the bully with cunning instead of moralising.
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Hey Marcelo, Very interesting concept, I think that the logline is a little longwinded and could be refined a little more. Perhaps "in the building across from him" could be cut unless it is entirely crucial to the plot and the wording for "he must stumble on a foolish quest on a dating app to findRead more
Hey Marcelo,
Very interesting concept, I think that the logline is a little longwinded and could be refined a little more.
Perhaps “in the building across from him” could be cut unless it is entirely crucial to the plot and the wording for “he must stumble on a foolish quest on a dating app to find her” could be worded better.
Cheers.
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