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When a nuclear war breaks out near the borders of his country, A 78 year old Ex Veteran leaves his home with his widowed neighbor in hopes to get to safety; but when they learn that she has been exposed to radiation and don’t have much time to flee to safety, he must make a hard decision, leave her at an abandoned country hotel or to stay with her till the end.
I like it I would watch this kind of movie, it would be very emotional
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when power hungry aliens close in on earth, one of the worlds most skilled gamers must play a game of five card poker with them in order to save humanity
Interesting concept, plus it can be shot in a single room. Not sure if you have to say five-card poker since traditional poker is played with five cards, so you can cut it to just poker. If there is anything to change in the logline, perhaps the description, 'one of the world's most skilled gamers'Read more
Interesting concept, plus it can be shot in a single room.
Not sure if you have to say five-card poker since traditional poker is played with five cards, so you can cut it to just poker.
If there is anything to change in the logline, perhaps the description, ‘one of the world’s most skilled gamers’ is a bit long, why not, ‘the world’s best gamer,’ or ‘world champion poker player’?
But these are minute details. The logline is solid if you don’t want to change it.
See lessIn a semi-medieval city, an abused blind orphan boy with magical powers must stop a megalomeniac businessman before he obliterates his kingdom and his people.
Hi Benneth, I can see that you've tried out a few different ways of wording this idea. I think fantasy adventures are always fun and this seems like it may be a hybrid of sorts, but it needs some clarification. I'm not sure what a semi-medieval city is. It's hard for me to imagine and I get hung upRead more
Hi Benneth,
I can see that you’ve tried out a few different ways of wording this idea. I think fantasy adventures are always fun and this seems like it may be a hybrid of sorts, but it needs some clarification.
I’m not sure what a semi-medieval city is. It’s hard for me to imagine and I get hung up on trying to figure out what that is, instead of being engaged by the potential of the story.
Are we in some alternate universe where such a thing could exist? Or is there another explanation? it needs to be communicated in a succinct way within the log-line.
Also, I’m not sure how a business man exists in such a world. In a medieval setting he’d be a merchant or powerful land owner, the term businessman seems too modern for the setting your describing.
I’d centralize your hero a bit more in the logline, clarify the setting, and also add a detail about the danger: Why does your megalomanic business man want to destroy the kingdom?
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