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A depressed single mother must flee her country within two days or risk her two children taken by child services
Do you mean escape? ----- "When Child Protective Service threatens her, a depressed mother has two days to escape her country before her children are taken."
Do you mean escape?
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“When Child Protective Service threatens her, a depressed mother has two days to escape her country before her children are taken.”
The survivor of a failed space mission must prove his loyalties between the bizarre inhabitants of an asteroid colony and the mad doctor who controls the colony or face certain death in the void of space.
What is the central conflict? Is the central conflict just that the lead must prove his loyalty or die? Just curious.
What is the central conflict?
Is the central conflict just that the lead must prove his loyalty or die?
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When an abused blind orphaned boy discovers his magical powers, he struggles to stop a megalomeniac businessman with intent to obliterate his kingdom and his people.
I am not really a fan of the word 'struggles' in a logline ---- "A blind orphan must use his newfound magic powers to stop a megalomaniac from obliterating his kingdom." ---- By the way, is there a reason why a businessman would want to obliterate a kingdom? A businessman by nature would need peopleRead more
I am not really a fan of the word ‘struggles’ in a logline
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“A blind orphan must use his newfound magic powers to stop a megalomaniac from obliterating his kingdom.”
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By the way, is there a reason why a businessman would want to obliterate a kingdom? A businessman by nature would need people to buy his products. If everyone is dead there is no one to do business with.
In other words, a businessman would want a healthy kingdom not a destroyed kingdom.
That doesn’t mean you villain wouldn’t act that way, but a couple of words in the logline explaining why destroying the kingdom would be in the businessman’s best self-interest would help the logline.
Anyway sounds like an interesting concept, good luck with this.
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