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An earnest biology teacher struggles to stop the U.S. military from weaponizing a space-borne virus when his infected students show signs of telepathy.
That's an interesting idea, but what is the death stakes, Is the teacher afraid of someone noticing the student showing signs of telepathy? Or is the student using it to harm people or is the teacher afraid more people will begin to have this ability?
That’s an interesting idea, but what is the death stakes, Is the teacher afraid of someone noticing the student showing signs of telepathy? Or is the student using it to harm people or is the teacher afraid more people will begin to have this ability?
See lessWhile a timid heiress plans to overthrow her abusive mother, a disenfranchised heir to the wealthiest family in the U.S struggles with his responsibility after his grandfather puts his inheritance up for grabs in his will.
I think the logline is to long for me, I'm trying to see who the antagonist is here and who the protagonist is and the death steaks but I get lost half way through, then It just leaves me blank at the end wondering what? Can you change the words to make them more appealing, An insecure son plans toRead more
I think the logline is to long for me, I’m trying to see who the antagonist is here and who the protagonist is and the death steaks but I get lost half way through, then It just leaves me blank at the end wondering what? Can you change the words to make them more appealing,
See lessAn insecure son plans to over through his abusive mother, an excluded heir to the wealthiest family in the U.S struggles with his responsibility after his grandfather puts his inheritance up for grabs in his will.
But I’m still not sure what the death stakes are here?
After an American ambassador discovers he fathered a child in Mexico twelve years ago, he and his son’s gay adoptive parents must rescue him from the clutches of a ruthless drug lord who also claims to be the boy’s father before the child succumbs to a life-threatening disease.
Sure is tough to get a logline on this one under 30 words lol, a lot to this story. Here is an attempt: ----- "When their adopted son is kidnapped by a ruthless drug lord who claims to be the kid's real father, a gay couple and the child's biological dad team up to rescue the boy from the criminal'sRead more
Sure is tough to get a logline on this one under 30 words lol, a lot to this story.
Here is an attempt:
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“When their adopted son is kidnapped by a ruthless drug lord who claims to be the kid’s real father, a gay couple and the child’s biological dad team up to rescue the boy from the criminal’s seemingly impregnable compound.”
(Perhaps add, before the kid dies from kidney failure, but that would really make the logline long)
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