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A group of hybrid humans and predators like Cannonbolt of Ben 10 version transformed into subsidiary ecosystem like Elysium space station must kill the mortals who stand in their way to conquer the galaxy into ecosystem by building exterior and interior dimensional planets between the dimension of universe.
I wanted to review but my brain just exploded.
I wanted to review but my brain just exploded.
See lessA meteralistic business man enters THE TOWER which can only be entered at the bottom and existed at the top. He must quickly learn the rules of THE TOWER if he ever wants to see the outside world again.
A very important element is missing from this logline. That is, 'the lead character's goal' What does the businessman hope to achieve by entering the tower? And what event stets the story into motion? Here is a logline attempt, however, mine is a little long, and had to guess at some stuff, but I hoRead more
A very important element is missing from this logline. That is, ‘the lead character’s goal’
What does the businessman hope to achieve by entering the tower?
And what event stets the story into motion?
Here is a logline attempt, however, mine is a little long, and had to guess at some stuff, but I hope it helps:
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“When he discovers his business is about to go under, a materialistic businessman enters THE TOWER; a deadly seven-floor maze, if he succeeds, he will receive enough wealth to save his business, but if he fails he will lose out on all the things he is just now realizing are truly important.”
Imprisoned cowboy elephant, Rabab (45), is presented with a 3-day do or die mission – capture a cowgirl vigilante, Sky (20), or his bomb collar will be detonated. But when Sky reveals that the Sheriff who imprisoned Rabab was involved in the genocide of Rabab’s race, Rabab must team up with Sky, take down the Sheriff and his deputies, and remove the bomb collar before his trunk blows off.
it sounds interesting but the logline needs to be reworked. it has the main elements of a good one since we have a little idea of who is the character, who is the force against him and what are the stakes. making it shorter and brief will be ideal.
it sounds interesting but the logline needs to be reworked. it has the main elements of a good one since we have a little idea of who is the character, who is the force against him and what are the stakes. making it shorter and brief will be ideal.
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