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A Latin American immigrant teen who is also of Chinese descent lives his “Wonder Years” trying to fit in a half black, half white small Missisippi town in the 1980s.
This is what I’m able to glean: “Set in a 1980s Mississippi town, a mixed-race Latino teen must overcome racism in order to [GOAL]” OR “… overcome prejudice against immigrants …” OR Show “Wonder Years” e.g., “… racism when falling for the mayor’s daughter” Hope you find this constructive, make thisRead more
This is what I’m able to glean:
“Set in a 1980s Mississippi town, a mixed-race Latino teen must overcome racism in order to [GOAL]”
OR
“… overcome prejudice against immigrants …”
OR
Show “Wonder Years” e.g., “… racism when falling for the mayor’s daughter”
Hope you find this constructive, make this yours – keep going!
See lessA princess who kills an important general to rescue another girl must hope her former enemies will accept her after her escape, now wanted dead or alive.
Consider the following: A princess in what land? A worldbuilder can help the reader envision your premise. Can “an important general” be the captain of the guards or royal castle guards – you get the idea. Who is this girl? E.g., a wrongfully accused servant. What is their quest that lands them in aRead more
Consider the following:
A princess in what land? A worldbuilder can help the reader envision your premise.
Can “an important general” be the captain of the guards or royal castle guards – you get the idea.
Who is this girl? E.g., a wrongfully accused servant.
What is their quest that lands them in a rival kingdom?
Hope you find this constructive, take care.
See lessA family man is surprised by an old girlfriend on his birthday and must confront his past to save his future.
If the goal of the lead character is to 'save his future' then in the logline you should tell us in a word or two what is threatening his future.
If the goal of the lead character is to ‘save his future’ then in the logline you should tell us in a word or two what is threatening his future.
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