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  1. Posted: December 10, 2021In: Horror

    When she gets the approval for making her first film on the script she has stolen or adapted from the pages of a shredded diary from a dilapidated library, she finds out that whoever from the cast and crew finishes reading it dies mysteriously in the same manner as in the script and diary. The script is already circulated online to all and whoever reads the first line could not put it down until finishes it.

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    kimberly Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 10, 2021 at 7:25 am

    I am not good at this stuff but...I was toying around with these ideas. When a novice filmmaker uses a stolen script for her first project, the cast and crew fall prey to the same manner of death they’ve read; once she discovers it was someone’s diary she's determined to find the author... You get wRead more

    I am not good at this stuff but…I was toying around with these ideas.

    When a novice filmmaker uses a stolen script for her first project, the cast and crew fall prey to the same manner of death they’ve read; once she discovers it was someone’s diary she’s determined to find the author…

    You get where I’m going? The logline needs a “to do” for the protagonist..what is she going to do about these murders? How do you plan to solve this mystery?

    When a script seems capable of murder,
    The curse of the murderous script

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  2. Posted: December 6, 2021In: SciFi

    A Space Force hires a mercenary to get other recruits to take down their mentor who betrayed them.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 9, 2021 at 4:24 pm

    These guys hire another guy, to recruit some other guys to do a job... ...Take the long way home

    These guys hire another guy, to recruit some other guys to do a job…

    …Take the long way home

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  3. Posted: December 6, 2021In: Crime

    A woman seeks vengeance against two men who made her life a living hell, her husband and a corrupt lawyer, but after she sets them up to kill on another, she struggles to prove her innocence when the police discover she had reason to kill them.

    tschrack Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 9, 2021 at 6:16 am

    Hmm. This feels a bit long. Compelling but a bit too many words to get the point across. Could you start it with "When a *adj* woman orchestrates her husband and lawyer to kill each other, one cop connects the dots and she has to stay one step ahead of him."

    Hmm. This feels a bit long. Compelling but a bit too many words to get the point across. Could you start it with “When a *adj* woman orchestrates her husband and lawyer to kill each other, one cop connects the dots and she has to stay one step ahead of him.”

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