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  1. Posted: November 20, 2021In: Superhero

    When a future millionaire obsessed with time travel sets in motion his evil plan to achieve it, a high school boy with superpowers tries to stop the future catastrophe.

    speedymax Penpusher
    Added an answer on November 20, 2021 at 5:10 am

    hi i'm the author i'm new to this please help hahahaha

    hi i’m the author i’m new to this please help hahahaha

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  2. Posted: November 19, 2021In: Horror

    A group of filmmakers decide to short films about cursed objects.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 20, 2021 at 1:23 am

    Ok, are they student filmmakers that bite off more than they can chew when making a film about cursed objects for their final? You get the idea.

    Ok, are they student filmmakers that bite off more than they can chew when making a film about cursed objects for their final? You get the idea.

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  3. Posted: November 18, 2021In: Coming of Age

    A strawberry obsessed college student runs away to seek fame after suffering from physical and emotional abuse in 1960s San Diego.

    Philippe Le Miere Logliner
    Added an answer on November 18, 2021 at 3:58 pm

    "strawberry obsessed college student" = protagonist "traumatic childhood" = inciting incident "growing up" = goal "1960s San Diego" = setting Could be a good story sketch, but overall too vague. Lets start with the kooky 'strawberry' obsession. What underlying character flaw might this be revealing?Read more

    “strawberry obsessed college student” = protagonist

    “traumatic childhood” = inciting incident

    “growing up” = goal

    “1960s San Diego” = setting

    Could be a good story sketch, but overall too vague.

    Lets start with the kooky ‘strawberry’ obsession. What underlying character flaw might this be revealing? Greed (over eating) or ambition (to be a strawberry farm). As it stands, this is more a distinguishing mark of character, rather than a character trait.

    traumatic childhood sounds nasty, but be specific. Head trauma, rape trauma, verbal abuse trauma … Sighting the source of trauma would reveal the drama’s villain too.

    Growing up is a good goal, but could it be more specific? Getting out of a bad relationship is specific, and maybe this story is about living with an abusive parent … just riffing here. The point is trauma must come from some where, causing character to do something, to attempt to be somewhere else
    – like wishing they were in the middle of a strawberry farm, eating an endless supply of strawberries.

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