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The mob’s top enforcer does not experience fear or pain, he is selfless, loyal and incredibly focused but his life is on the line and he is running out of time because the headstrong and impulsive youth who steals £17m from the mob is always just one step ahead.
Consider the following: [A stone-cold] or [The families top] mob enforcer must [track down GOAL]… His life is one the line by whom? Instead of “running out of time”, take how much time he has and translate into your logline e.g. A stone-cold mob enforcer has three days to [GOAL]… For color, who is tRead more
Consider the following:
[A stone-cold] or [The families top] mob enforcer must [track down GOAL]…
His life is one the line by whom?
Instead of “running out of time”, take how much time he has and translate into your logline e.g. A stone-cold mob enforcer has three days to [GOAL]…
For color, who is this youth? E.g., mob-turned-informant, enforcers apprentice, or bagman? You get the idea.
Hope you find this constructive, take care.
See lessA retired cavalry soldier is forced to partner with a Cheyenne Indian to track down a serial killer who has kidnaped his daughter.
Maybe play up the idea that he's traumatized by something that the Native Americans did to him during the war so it contrasts with the idea that he has to team up with a Cheyenne Indian to save his daughter. Works for me, otherwise.
Maybe play up the idea that he’s traumatized by something that the Native Americans did to him during the war so it contrasts with the idea that he has to team up with a Cheyenne Indian to save his daughter. Works for me, otherwise.
See lessMadrid, the beginning of the seventies of the last century. A girl is born marked by a chilling, temporary possession of her mother. Madrid, at the beginning of the nineties, twenty years later, the same protagonist, turned into a medium, faces the spirit of her best friend.
There is a lot going on in your logline and wondering how you can make it more concise. Maybe something like this: Claudia Vázquez, a medium and parapsychologist, must find a way to defeat a demonic spirit that has haunted her since the womb.
There is a lot going on in your logline and wondering how you can make it more concise. Maybe something like this:
Claudia Vázquez, a medium and parapsychologist, must find a way to defeat a demonic spirit that has haunted her since the womb.
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