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While retaking Europe an allied soldier finds a book with invaluable secrets that lead him on a worldwide treasure hunt where powerful opponents will stop at nothing to have it all for themselves.
Examples: “When reclaiming the Nazi Camelot during WWII” “an allied soldier sets out on a worldwide treasure hunt” “an allied soldier finds himself up against a megalomaniac US general” “following clues from a looted ancient Dead Sea copper scroll” Baddie's goal: Nazis need the treasure to birth theRead more
Examples:
“When reclaiming the Nazi Camelot during WWII”
“an allied soldier sets out on a worldwide treasure hunt”
“an allied soldier finds himself up against a megalomaniac US general”
“following clues from a looted ancient Dead Sea copper scroll”
Baddie’s goal: Nazis need the treasure to birth the Fourth Reich.
This is your story, make these yours; hope you find these examples helpful.
See lessA small-town news anchor accidentally uncovers a deadly bombshell secret on live TV, forcing her to find the truth that will save the town.
Consider the following: What is the deadly bombshell she’s reporting on? This will shed light on her truth/hero’s journey to save her beloved town. The rule of “Show, don’t tell” applies here, as I cannot envision what your “secret” will look like on-screen. FYI: this gives me an Erin Brockovich vibRead more
Consider the following:
What is the deadly bombshell she’s reporting on? This will shed light on her truth/hero’s journey to save her beloved town. The rule of “Show, don’t tell” applies here, as I cannot envision what your “secret” will look like on-screen.
FYI: this gives me an Erin Brockovich vibe, I’m probably way off, but this will give you an idea of what a reader may deduce from your current logline.
Hope you find this constructive, keep going!
See lessCoerced into losing, a past his prime boxer desperate to redeem his past must regain his boxing license to compete in a final fight of his life for the last, most precious payday, custody of his kidnapped son.
"A past his prime boxer...(character) ....desperate for one last payday to find and win custody of his son ("Actionable Goal" but not sure why his payday is going to find or win his son back?), ....discovers he is the target of a con. (This doesn't feel like a major event) Suggested Example: "A pastRead more
“A past his prime boxer…(character)
….desperate for one last payday to find and win custody of his son (“Actionable Goal” but not sure why his payday is going to find or win his son back?),
….discovers he is the target of a con. (This doesn’t feel like a major event)
Suggested Example: “A past his prime boxer is coaxed into an underground “fight of his life” competition to win back a precious bounty, his son.”
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