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A failed private investigator becomes entangled in the disappearance of a 17-year-old girl to clear a large gambling debt.
I like the story when I read your synopsis, but your logline needs polish. How about: When a failed investigator can't pay back his gambling debt he gets 1 week to find the missing daughter of a murderous creditor. It's not there yet, but raise the stakes. Have fun, Nis from Denmark
I like the story when I read your synopsis, but your logline needs polish. How about:
When a failed investigator can’t pay back his gambling debt he gets 1 week to find the missing daughter of a murderous creditor.
It’s not there yet, but raise the stakes.
Have fun,
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Unable to conceive children and desperate to be a mother, a gifted young teacher comes to work for a family that has been beset by tragedy and serendipitously changes all their lives for the better
I think you have to work with the word “comes to”… this has to be a something she has to do … or else… So maybe something like.. Unable to conceive children and desperate to be a mother, a young teacher loses her job and therefor comes to work for a man and his disciplined children while he looks foRead more
I think you have to work with the word “comes to”… this has to be a something she has to do … or else…
So maybe something like..
Unable to conceive children and desperate to be a mother, a young teacher loses her job and therefor comes to work for a man and his disciplined children while he looks for a suitable wife.
See lessAn African teenager gets a chance at a new life in rural America and adopts a smart-talking street cat who is wanted by the law.
This is what I can glean: “An African teenager and a cheeky street cat [GOAL] in rural America” Make this yours, keep going!
This is what I can glean:
“An African teenager and a cheeky street cat [GOAL] in rural America”
Make this yours, keep going!
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