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Chosen by destiny, five teenage runaways entered to a parallel world. Empowered by mystical swords,they vow to protect the kingdom from the army of the underworld.
When writing a logline, it is good to figure out what sets the story in motion. What is the big event that changes the lead character(s) life? Let me try a logline from the perspective that traveling to a parallel world is that big event. "When they are transported to a magical realm under attack byRead more
When writing a logline, it is good to figure out what sets the story in motion. What is the big event that changes the lead character(s) life?
Let me try a logline from the perspective that traveling to a parallel world is that big event.
“When they are transported to a magical realm under attack by an underworld army, five runaways head to the call to protect the land with the help of a snarky magical sword.”
Obviously, I added the term ‘snarky’ to give the logline a little flavor.
Also, this logline could benefit from having a lead character.
Hope this helped.
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I like it. The premise sounds promising. I would try to be more specific about how their lives are being threatened and what kind of supernatural forces they're dealing with.
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