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After The murder of there friend, a group of inner-city teens vows revenge by killing every cop in California.
What compels the reader to want the lead characters to succeed? I could see if the leads went after the specific police officer but to kill every cop in California, both men, and women, Black, Asian, White, young, old, even those who have dedicated their lives to helping others? At some point won'tRead more
What compels the reader to want the lead characters to succeed?
I could see if the leads went after the specific police officer but to kill every cop in California, both men, and women, Black, Asian, White, young, old, even those who have dedicated their lives to helping others?
At some point won’t people tune out?
See lessFollowing an unsettling incident on a night out, a young woman’s adverse reaction awakens an uncontrollable craving for human flesh.
I don't think you can withhold the story points here. What is the inciting incident, what is the adverse reaction and what happens if she can't control her craving for human flesh? Maybe checkout the logline for Santa Clarita Diet and see if you could twist it into horror (if you are going for horroRead more
I don’t think you can withhold the story points here. What is the inciting incident, what is the adverse reaction and what happens if she can’t control her craving for human flesh? Maybe checkout the logline for Santa Clarita Diet and see if you could twist it into horror (if you are going for horror of course).
See lessIn the year 2112, Tom Sawyer discovers a guitar, forbidden by The Priests of Syrinx. Embracing The Spirit of Radio, Tom wants to express his Freewill through music. Forced to Fly By Night, he uncovers a secret Closer to the Heart that threatens the governing technocracy.
Was he transported to 2112, already establishing a sci-fi element? Or is this a new story? Overall, I think you could get your three sentences down to one by eliminating repetition. This sounds a lot like the stage play "We Will Rock You." Personally, the Rush songs are not relatable to me but if thRead more
Was he transported to 2112, already establishing a sci-fi element? Or is this a new story? Overall, I think you could get your three sentences down to one by eliminating repetition. This sounds a lot like the stage play “We Will Rock You.” Personally, the Rush songs are not relatable to me but if this was a favorite band of mine, maybe it would hit more? Either way, this sounds like a great story for older rock fans. You would have to target very specifically when querying.
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