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A rookie hitman and a contract killer are next on the hit-list after taking shortcuts and killing the wrong guy twice on a mission ordered by a mafia kingpin. To avoid certain death, they make a body bubble from a victim’s corpse, frame their boss, and get away with the payment – A real killer story
Wouldn't the mafia boss find out early on the real mark is still alive – making trouble? It would be funny while the bungling hitmen are doing their thang the real mark shows up. I’m sure you have an answer for this, it’s just not clear to me how you overcome the gap. Take care.
Wouldn’t the mafia boss find out early on the real mark is still alive – making trouble? It would be funny while the bungling hitmen are doing their thang the real mark shows up. I’m sure you have an answer for this, it’s just not clear to me how you overcome the gap.
Take care.
See lessAn anthology series about an different high school student and a different hitman swapping bodies.
Consider the following: 1. Find a solid student/hitmen connection. 2. Tell us they switch bodies. If unique tell us how; this can answer the Why Now. 3. Tell us what they must overcome to reach their goal. 4. Up the stakes by including a ticking clock. Hope you find this constructive, take care.
Consider the following:
1. Find a solid student/hitmen connection.
2. Tell us they switch bodies. If unique tell us how; this can answer the Why Now.
3. Tell us what they must overcome to reach their goal.
4. Up the stakes by including a ticking clock.
Hope you find this constructive, take care.
See lessAt a truck stop in Arkansas, a retired alcoholic cop turned paranormal investigator on a quest to reunite with his deceased son warns a brother and sister not to check into the Hardin Hill Bed and Breakfast.
This is a scene not a story. A Story: Lead character Something happens to them This creates a goal Something stands in the way of that goal Who is the lead character? What do they want? What is standing in their way?
This is a scene not a story.
A Story:
Lead character
Something happens to them
This creates a goal
Something stands in the way of that goal
Who is the lead character?
See lessWhat do they want?
What is standing in their way?