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When an immigrant artist’s Matryoshkas get hijacked as Russian espionage, she must risk her own life and destroy a successful business in order to protect her adopted homeland.
I really like this Logline, makes me wanna see the movie!!!
I really like this Logline, makes me wanna see the movie!!!
See lessWhen the wife of a cheating writer is gone, he must get her back
This logline needs just a little more. Perhaps tell us what he must do to get his wife back. (if this is an example logline I don't think I have seen the movie) Does the writer need to change his ways to win back his wife? Does he need to complete some epic task or perhaps prove his love in some speRead more
This logline needs just a little more.
Perhaps tell us what he must do to get his wife back. (if this is an example logline I don’t think I have seen the movie)
Does the writer need to change his ways to win back his wife? Does he need to complete some epic task or perhaps prove his love in some specific way?
Also, you should personalize the beginning of this logline.
“When his wife leaves him, a cheating writer must, (Do this thing) in order to win her back”
Hope this helps
See lessAfter a lot of fairytale characters take over his swamp, the xenophobic ogre must save the princess to get his swamp back.
Shrek Solid attempt, however, you might want to avoid using the term 'a lot' I would say drop 'a lot' altogether or use a more interesting word, like Gaggle. "After fairytale creatures overrun his swamp, a reclusive ogre must save a princess to get his swamp back." "After a gaggle of fairytale creatRead more
Shrek
Solid attempt, however, you might want to avoid using the term ‘a lot’
I would say drop ‘a lot’ altogether or use a more interesting word, like Gaggle.
“After fairytale creatures overrun his swamp, a reclusive ogre must save a princess to get his swamp back.”
“After a gaggle of fairytale creatures overrun his swamp, a reclusive ogre must save a princess to get his swamp back.”
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