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After being left home alone by accident over christmas, an eight year old boy must defend his house from a duo of incompetent burglars.
Good job! I would maybe throw some of the words around in the beginning. "After accidentally being left behind over Christmas, a mischievous 8-year-old has to protect his family's home from a duo of incompetent burglars."
Good job! I would maybe throw some of the words around in the beginning. “After accidentally being left behind over Christmas, a mischievous 8-year-old has to protect his family’s home from a duo of incompetent burglars.”
See lessWhen a lethal alien is brought on board a spaceship by accident, the crew has to fight for their survival in order to escape
In space no one can hear you in space. Jokes aside, nice logline! I'm thinking to tighten it, maybe you could write "when a lethal alien is found onboard a spaceship" instead? Also, is no one the main character, do we follow the entire crew? Could someone hold the POV for the logline?
In space no one can hear you in space.
Jokes aside, nice logline!
See lessI’m thinking to tighten it, maybe you could write “when a lethal alien is found onboard a spaceship” instead?
Also, is no one the main character, do we follow the entire crew? Could someone hold the POV for the logline?
When his kids are kidnapped, a workaholic lawyer must return to his childhood and discover who he really is in order to save them.
Very clean logline. Since I first didn't know which movie this was, I pictured a dark thriller movie, but now knowing which film we are talking about, I must re-visit this film. Good word describing our hero, which tells us what he must put aside in order to solve his problems. It also gives us a piRead more
Very clean logline. Since I first didn’t know which movie this was, I pictured a dark thriller movie, but now knowing which film we are talking about, I must re-visit this film.
See lessGood word describing our hero, which tells us what he must put aside in order to solve his problems. It also gives us a picture of him somewhat neglecting his children at the start and not only have to save them, but also change his behaviour.