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The ambitious but reserved son of a dreamer discovers a hidden world of supers and joins the agency that keeps the secret, only to discover he has been in denial of his own, subtle superpower.
So, what is your reluctant hero’s goal? Beyond hero discovery and him getting absorbed into an agency – what does he bring to the table to make this premise unique? Who is your baddie and what is their goal? Hope you find this constructive, take care.
So, what is your reluctant hero’s goal? Beyond hero discovery and him getting absorbed into an agency – what does he bring to the table to make this premise unique? Who is your baddie and what is their goal?
Hope you find this constructive, take care.
See lessA nurse saved her patients from secret genetic experimentation, but her investigation exposed her to some of the engineered DNA componenets. Will she survive to save the rest of the world? The rise of Chelsea Dahl, the worlds first nurse super hero!
Your synopsis and logline seem to be about different stories. Also I'm not sure how she would be exposed to genetic agents that are part of transplanted organs.
Your synopsis and logline seem to be about different stories. Also I’m not sure how she would be exposed to genetic agents that are part of transplanted organs.
See lessWhen a young boy is taken away from his father, and starts to get raped by his mother, he must find a way to escape.
It reads like an opening line or a teaser not a complete logline. Also delete"When" and start with"A" and delete "starts to get raped" and insert "gets raped" to tighten it up and make the action more immediate
It reads like an opening line or a teaser not a complete logline. Also delete”When” and start with”A” and delete “starts to get raped” and insert “gets raped” to tighten it up and make the action more immediate
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