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After stealing money from what he believes is a small time gang, a former criminal (never caught) finds himself and his girlfriend being pursued by the men he stole from. With nowhere left to go, our protagonist is forced into working with the police to help track down what turns out to be a deadly criminal organization.
Why is he stealing money from a gang? What makes him better than the people he's stealing from and therefore makes us root for him? "A man" - that's all you have to say about the hero of your story!? This is the character on whom the weight of the entire plot rests; he has the burden of being the emRead more
Why is he stealing money from a gang? What makes him better than the people he’s stealing from and therefore makes us root for him?
“A man” – that’s all you have to say about the hero of your story!? This is the character on whom the weight of the entire plot rests; he has the burden of being the emotional core of the story, and the being who you are expecting an audience to follow to hell and back and will to succeed at every turn… and he’s just “a man”. Your hero deserves better!
What will happen if he’s caught? Why do we care?
See lessA researcher discovers a group of young children who have a collective consciousness, but no one believes him, even when he learns of the children’s plan to rid the world of all those outside their group mind.
So what's he going to do about it? This is just the first act, what happens for the duration of the 90min+ runtime? Who is this researcher? Why is he our protagonist?
So what’s he going to do about it? This is just the first act, what happens for the duration of the 90min+ runtime?
Who is this researcher? Why is he our protagonist?
See lessWhen a suicidal woman rediscovers the letters from her imprisoned lover sent 4o years ago she decides to reply. Her reply leads to a deeper understanding of how self-forgiveness after a tragedy can be the hardest thing of all to overcome.
Sounds more like a romance to me! Love the concept. Given that self-forgiveness sometimes plays out for both characters at some point, flipping it to the love-interest's story, this could be their logline: "When a man is heartbroken after the love of his life leaves him and he subconsciously holds oRead more
Sounds more like a romance to me! Love the concept.
Given that self-forgiveness sometimes plays out for both characters at some point, flipping it to the love-interest’s story, this could be their logline:
“When a man is heartbroken after the love of his life leaves him and he subconsciously holds onto her by continuing to work on their dream business, he must break free of his chains and declare his love after realising it is their divine love that brings him true happiness, not the business he has almost killed himself to keep alive.”
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