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  1. Posted: June 19, 2021In: SciFi

    All prophets organize in Vedic woods when three missing children’s time-travel with legendary Buddha unfolds a stunning battlefield, where the devil imprisoned God for ages. As Buddha detects every believer standing with evil at the battleground, He opens his third eye and telepathically smashes each hypocritical shield to liberate God.

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    Added an answer on June 20, 2021 at 9:44 am

    I love this concept. Very colourful. I can see it playing out. Would love to see it made. The greatest of light versus the greatest of darkness. "When three missing children accidentally time travel to the Bodhi tree and find the Buddha himself at the moment of enlightenment, they must take a crashRead more

    I love this concept. Very colourful. I can see it playing out. Would love to see it made. The greatest of light versus the greatest of darkness.

    “When three missing children accidentally time travel to the Bodhi tree and find the Buddha himself at the moment of enlightenment, they must take a crash course in spiritual surrender when they are thrust into a battle in the Vedic woods where Buddha opens his third eye to telepathically smash the devil and all hypocritical energies standing in the way of Godly peace.”

    Not that yours is this, but, totally on a side note, when I was a child I was hooked on the TV show ‘Monkey’. It was Japanese, I think. Raced home in the afternoons to watch it. It followed buddhist principles in a comedic and slightly twisted way. Just seeing the buddhism on the screen attracted me. 🙂

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  2. Posted: June 14, 2021In: Comedy

    Inorder to Save and Marry his Indian Girlfriend who is getting arranged Married, An American Highschool teacher is being tricked by his Indian Student and Colleagues plans & Kidnaps his Girlfriend from her Strict Cultural Family

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    Added an answer on June 14, 2021 at 3:08 pm

    The flow is disjointed in several places and many words have been unnecessarily capitalised. Having the twist of being tricked mid sentence could be amplified if it went closer to the end, thus building intrigue. A possible edit could be: In order to save his Indian girlfriend from an imminent arranRead more

    The flow is disjointed in several places and many words have been unnecessarily capitalised. Having the twist of being tricked mid sentence could be amplified if it went closer to the end, thus building intrigue.
    A possible edit could be:
    In order to save his Indian girlfriend from an imminent arranged marriage, an American high school teacher plans to kidnap his girlfriend from her strict cultural family, only to find he has been tricked by his Indian student and colleagues.

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  3. Posted: June 14, 2021In: Adventure

    When an adventurous lone hunter is lost to the river gorges, chasing a mysterious man or beast known as the Bunyip, his grieving family and friends must pick up the pieces and discover the truth about his disappearance.

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    Added an answer on June 14, 2021 at 2:51 pm

    Edit: When an adventurous lone hunter, chasing an elusive man or beast, locally known as the Bunyip, is tragically lost to the river gorges, his grieving family and friends must pick up the pieces and discover the truth about his untimely disappearance.

    Edit:
    When an adventurous lone hunter, chasing an elusive man or beast, locally known as the Bunyip, is tragically lost to the river gorges, his grieving family and friends must pick up the pieces and discover the truth about his untimely disappearance.

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