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After the lawyer’s aide is torture and kill by the 20 policemen—he sues them, and must uncover their leader who order the hit in the underworld of police corrupt bureau.
Why does he need to sue them? They just killed a man - if he's got the evidence to sue them, then there's evidence that will convict them of murder. Why was the lawyer's aide killed in the first place? You said it was a hit... but why? What sets this story apart from every other police corruption fiRead more
Why does he need to sue them? They just killed a man – if he’s got the evidence to sue them, then there’s evidence that will convict them of murder.
Why was the lawyer’s aide killed in the first place? You said it was a hit… but why?
What sets this story apart from every other police corruption film? L.A. Confidential springs to mind instantly.
See lessCriminal investigator Darryl Blake groups with four detective trainees to gather evidence involving snuff video related crimes taken place at a university. While insisting ASPD student Matthew Efflick may be the culprit, almost little to no evidence can be found to prove it; all while he’s continuing his murderous pursuit.
Using a detective organization as your lead doesn't draw the reader in. It's impersonal. Instead, you should have a lead character in your logline. Someone to who the reader can attach and want to follow.
Using a detective organization as your lead doesn’t draw the reader in. It’s impersonal.
Instead, you should have a lead character in your logline. Someone to who the reader can attach and want to follow.
See lessA anxious man must decrypt a disturbing, mysterious recurring dream that may hold the secret to preventing the end of the world.
Consider the following: 1. Why him? Who is this anxious protag that can save the world? 2. Why now - the dreams? 3. What is the recurring dream? E.g., death of the world via body snatchers, alien invasion – you get the idea. Elaborate on this to orientate the reader. 4. Think about your baddie's goaRead more
Consider the following:
1. Why him? Who is this anxious protag that can save the world?
2. Why now – the dreams?
3. What is the recurring dream? E.g., death of the world via body snatchers, alien invasion – you get the idea. Elaborate on this to orientate the reader.
4. Think about your baddie’s goal it may strengthen your logline E.g., revenge for the Roswell incident or like in Independence Day – planet harvesters.
Hope you find this constructive, keep going!
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