1. Posted: January 28, 2021In:

    God and Devil deliberate over the rights to the soul of a suicidal man.

    Odie Samurai

    Interesting, add 1984's "Oh, God! You Devil" to your research. Keep going, take care.

    Interesting, add 1984’s “Oh, God! You Devil” to your research.

    Keep going, take care.

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  2. Posted: January 28, 2021In:

    A woman, who can predict whether couples are in love, wants her old life back after well-intentioned friends turn her into an internet sensation, and she loses her magic touch and is outed as a fraud.

    Odie Samurai

    Leaning towards: "A gifted love doctor must regain her magic touch after discovering the downside of internet stardom" Take care.

    Leaning towards:
    “A gifted love doctor must regain her magic touch after discovering the downside of internet stardom”

    Take care.

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  3. Posted: January 27, 2021In:

    After losing his military post and falling into a terrifying curse, an ex-soldier travels to the place where he will find his deliverance and the way to the lost city of Elyon, which will save the people of the world of Dunya.

    Odie Samurai

    1. Since Elyon and Dunya are unfamiliar fantasy realms – a world setup may help e.g. In a world ruled by… 2. Appears the curse is your inciting incident; it may help to state what kind of curse this vet needs to break. 3. You need a baddie, someone/thing preventing him from achieving the goal. 4. OnRead more

    1. Since Elyon and Dunya are unfamiliar fantasy realms – a world setup may help e.g. In a world ruled by…
    2. Appears the curse is your inciting incident; it may help to state what kind of curse this vet needs to break.
    3. You need a baddie, someone/thing preventing him from achieving the goal.
    4. Once he achieves deliverance, why HIM to save the world?

    Example of what I can see:
    “A cursed veteran sets out on a journey to a mystical lost city for deliverance, but…”

    Keep going, take care.

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