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A researcher hired by NASA to find a wormhole during an alien invasion.
Isn't it a little superfluous to say from outer space? Where else would an alien invasion come from? And why does he only have seven days to do it if he has a time machine? Or is there some limitation that only allows him to travel seven days into the past? I remember seeing a few episodes of a shorRead more
Isn’t it a little superfluous to say from outer space? Where else would an alien invasion come from?
And why does he only have seven days to do it if he has a time machine? Or is there some limitation that only allows him to travel seven days into the past? I remember seeing a few episodes of a short-lived TV show with the premise that they always sent him seven days into the past.
See lessAn Indian woman returning to modern India during the heat of the mango season after almost a decade in the US is forced to choose between her lover and a traditional arranged marriage.
Hi, After reading the Logline I noticed it’s missing a few elements. I understand it’s a young Indian women returning home, then choosing between two men. It’s missing the conflict and antagonist force. What’s the thing jolts the protagonist life apart and what’s getting in her way. I would leave ouRead more
Hi,
See lessAfter reading the Logline I noticed it’s missing a few elements. I understand it’s a young Indian women returning home, then choosing between two men. It’s missing the conflict and antagonist force. What’s the thing jolts the protagonist life apart and what’s getting in her way.
I would leave out the modern India, of its set in the past that would be in the Logline. In addition during the heat of the mango season. Unless there is specific reason why. For example a festival or family business. Then use that instead.
James son of the king of the Tree-GLow Kingdom, is called to save the kingdom of a dragon. He has to defend it for his family and the kingdom fighting with the wisdom of the Esential Gems.
Hi, I like we’re you’re heading with the story. I get it’s a fantasy, and a kingdom that needs saved. However, there are some parts that are missing and hard to understand. After reading your summary it was a little clearer. This site has a Logline formula I recommend using or this helps me as well.Read more
Hi,
See lessI like we’re you’re heading with the story. I get it’s a fantasy, and a kingdom that needs saved. However, there are some parts that are missing and hard to understand. After reading your summary it was a little clearer. This site has a Logline formula I recommend using or this helps me as well.
Protagonist + inciting incident + central conflict + protagonist goal.
Does not have to be in that exact order, but it ensures you get those main elements in the logline.
Here is my example
When a evil dragon threatens a kingdom, a skittish prince must defeat it before it gains ultimate power and destroy’s everything in its path.
You want to simplify it and get to the point. Don’t use specific names. The rules or the backstory is not known so it has to understandable for everyone. See what works for you then go from there. I hope this helps. Keep up the hard work.