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Three interwined stories between a group of astronauts in space finding them race against time to find their way home to Earth.
This logline is a bit vague. Even if there's a group of characters there should be someone who's the main protagonist, and with astronauts, there'd be a chain of command. Someone should drive the plot forward more than the others, so write the logline from their perspective. Next, give them a clear,Read more
This logline is a bit vague.
Even if there’s a group of characters there should be someone who’s the main protagonist, and with astronauts, there’d be a chain of command. Someone should drive the plot forward more than the others, so write the logline from their perspective.
Next, give them a clear, tangible goal, like be the first humans to travel to Planet X, (change to whatever fits) or on a rescue mission to get that one astronaut they left for dead on Mars. (Guess what movie I just re-watched.) They should have a goal/mission.
Who, or what are trying to stop them from from achieving their goal/mission. I reckon this is “Something disastrous” but it would help if it’s more specific than that.
Finally what are the stakes, what happens if they fail, and also if there’s a ticking clock, they have limited time to achieve their goal/mission before the disaster. For instance, they have to catch Matt Damon before the stripped down space capsule falls back down to Mars.
See lessAfter being bullied because of her autism, a misunderstood college student joins a secret sorority group of girls only to find out she has a kill a fellow student.
The only movie that comes to my mind when I hear about a protagonist who MUST kill someone against their will is "The Killing of a Chinese Bookie" by John Cassavetes, where the killing was to balance a huge gambling dept to the mafia. What are the stakes in your story? She must kill a fellow studentRead more
The only movie that comes to my mind when I hear about a protagonist who MUST kill someone against their will is “The Killing of a Chinese Bookie” by John Cassavetes, where the killing was to balance a huge gambling dept to the mafia.
What are the stakes in your story? She must kill a fellow student or what? What’s stopping her from reporting the sorority as a crime organisation? Her autism? Is this realistic?
See lessSome believe We are One with all there is, connected to the spiritual realms, forces of Nature, animals and are born to do good unto others. But, when the darkness in our world grows too strong, what brings those of the Oneness, three women and a man together, to rise up against the Roman Empire and their God of War?
A 50+ word sentence in the form of a question and other than it has something to do with the Roman Empire I have no idea what I will see on screen. Who is the lead character? What do they want? What is standing in their way?
A 50+ word sentence in the form of a question and other than it has something to do with the Roman Empire I have no idea what I will see on screen.
Who is the lead character?
See lessWhat do they want?
What is standing in their way?