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When a now famous singer returns to his hometown after years, an old estranged friend and former band mate, now unsuccessful has to re-create an old gig of their band to get in contact with his friend again.
I like the premise. The logline needs to tighten up a bit. But it isn't that far off.
I like the premise.
The logline needs to tighten up a bit. But it isn’t that far off.
See lessA struggling writer’s fictional creations hold an intervention when real life responsibilities threaten to make him walk away from his dreams
I love the idea of combining fiction and reality and confront a writer with his characters. I am a huge fan of magical realism and stuff like that. If you can, specify what the responsibilities and dreams are that you mention so we can have a clearer picture, what is at stake.
I love the idea of combining fiction and reality and confront a writer with his characters. I am a huge fan of magical realism and stuff like that. If you can, specify what the responsibilities and dreams are that you mention so we can have a clearer picture, what is at stake.
See lessAfter being dumped by his longtime girlfriend, a man who believes in eternal love asks for a second chance and they are given the magical opportunity to start from the beginning with what they know today and do better.
Very cool, don’t we all wish we had this do-over chance 😉. Getting an “About Time & Click” movie vibe from this. 1. Most of these shows focus on the complications of time travel and have to come up with some unique method of how the time travel can occur which I am not seeing in your logline. ThRead more
Very cool, don’t we all wish we had this do-over chance 😉. Getting an “About Time & Click” movie vibe from this.
1. Most of these shows focus on the complications of time travel and have to come up with some unique method of how the time travel can occur which I am not seeing in your logline. This will give focus to your magical opportunity and the stakes.
2. Think about amping up your inciting incident e.g. “After being dumped by his longtime girlfriend, …” but make this your own, many loglines start like this – you get the idea. One way to keep the reader curious when constructing your logline is to have them questioning – how is he going to keep this reluctant girlfriend from saying “check, please” at any given moment?
Take care.
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