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After a programming error a troubled AI developer is trapped in a lab as they struggle to teach their flawed AI the value of human life, and find their own humanity, so the AI does not destroy the world they intended for it to save.
This is a little confusing, is the AI scientist an AI himself? That seems weird. Or is he a scientist who programs AI's? Also, you say 'an' AI scientist, then later you say 'their', which is plural, so is there more than one scientist or are you simply using a genderless pronoun? it's confusing. I'mRead more
This is a little confusing, is the AI scientist an AI himself? That seems weird. Or is he a scientist who programs AI’s?
Also, you say ‘an’ AI scientist, then later you say ‘their’, which is plural, so is there more than one scientist or are you simply using a genderless pronoun? it’s confusing.
I’m going to try to decipher this and come up with a logline, but I will probably be a little off:
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“When the AI he created attempts to destroy the world, a programmer must reason with artificial brain by arguing the good of humanity, in hopes of stopping its genocidal plans.”
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Sounds good. Wonder if you can shorten it. Maybe leave out the middle piece between the commas. And add some detail about the moral challenge.
Sounds good. Wonder if you can shorten it. Maybe leave out the middle piece between the commas. And add some detail about the moral challenge.
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Because the MMA fighter is the character with the goal, it seems that he would be the likely lead character, if that is the case the logline should be written from his perspective. However, if the alcoholic bar supply salesman is the lead character then this version is fine.
Because the MMA fighter is the character with the goal, it seems that he would be the likely lead character, if that is the case the logline should be written from his perspective.
However, if the alcoholic bar supply salesman is the lead character then this version is fine.
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