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Upon being diagnosed with lung cancer, a lifetime litterbug tries to make the world beautiful for his depressed granddaughter before he dies.
I love the goal, it makes for a very innocent and kind-hearted story, especially with two people that seem to be in quite hopeless situations. Not sure how it’s a comedy due to the utter hopelessness of the protag and his granddaughter, unless it’s a black comedy which could be fun.
I love the goal, it makes for a very innocent and kind-hearted story, especially with two people that seem to be in quite hopeless situations. Not sure how it’s a comedy due to the utter hopelessness of the protag and his granddaughter, unless it’s a black comedy which could be fun.
See lessIn order to find the real killer, a conscientious rookie detective partners with a pleasure-android, who claims the prime suspect in a murder investigation is innocent.
There's no inciting incident here. You do have an interesting pairing, although the fact that it's a pleasure-android really seems like a very random element in an otherwise cookie-cutter crime drama. Maybe give a hint at least about why this rookie would partner with it, and maybe one more word/eleRead more
There’s no inciting incident here. You do have an interesting pairing, although the fact that it’s a pleasure-android really seems like a very random element in an otherwise cookie-cutter crime drama. Maybe give a hint at least about why this rookie would partner with it, and maybe one more word/element to serve as an allusion to sci-fi.
See lessWhen a non-verbal young chef learns that her signature dish has been ripped off by a rival, she must win over a new elite clientele with her intuitive understanding of flavour and micro-dosing.
Again: what are the stakes? She must win over a new elite -- or else. And what is the obstacle that stands in her way? If she's already established her reputation with one smash hit, what's so hard about winning her clientele back , or a building a new one, with another dish?
Again: what are the stakes? She must win over a new elite — or else.
And what is the obstacle that stands in her way? If she’s already established her reputation with one smash hit, what’s so hard about winning her clientele back , or a building a new one, with another dish?
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