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When a gigantic firestorm burns through a family’s horse ranch in October 2003, the miracles it leaves behind bring Grant, an accomplished physicist, to the brink of believing in something more powerful than science.
A logline should tell the reader who's the lead character, what they want, and what's standing in their way. Because I don't know what your lead character wants, it's difficult to tell what the story is about. I can see it has something to do with magic apples, but not sure what the magic apples doRead more
A logline should tell the reader who’s the lead character, what they want, and what’s standing in their way.
Because I don’t know what your lead character wants, it’s difficult to tell what the story is about.
I can see it has something to do with magic apples, but not sure what the magic apples do nor what the lead character plans on doing with the magic apples now that he has them.
Anyway, this is just a critique of the logline, not the story itself.
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As always, I really enjoy this concept, hope you find the logline that will match
As always, I really enjoy this concept, hope you find the logline that will match
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It would probably be good to avoid having questions in a logline "When she kills her husband after discovering he abused their daughter, a desperate mother must hide the evidence to avoid discovery by her husband's best friend; their ex-cop neighbor."
It would probably be good to avoid having questions in a logline
“When she kills her husband after discovering he abused their daughter, a desperate mother must hide the evidence to avoid discovery by her husband’s best friend; their ex-cop neighbor.”
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