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  1. Posted: June 30, 2020In: Drama

    When his father and brother died in a tunnel collapse, a mischievous young boy must take over the work in mines to survive life.

    Stephanie Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 30, 2020 at 11:37 am

    Why is the boy mischievous and what will or won’t happen to him if he doesn’t solve the problem. Why is he taking over the mine ? You haven’t explained any of this nor the stakes that raise his risk either way.

    Why is the boy mischievous and what will or won’t happen to him if he doesn’t solve the problem. Why is he taking over the mine ? You haven’t explained any of this nor the stakes that raise his risk either way.

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  2. Posted: June 29, 2020In: Romance

    In a bid to keep his job, a commitment-phobic womanizer seduces his boss’s wholesome daughter, but when she genuinely falls for him, he must continue the charade.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on June 30, 2020 at 6:56 am

    How will seducing the wholesome daughter get him on the good side of the boss? Seems like just the opposite would be the case, that the father would be outraged.

    How will seducing the wholesome daughter get him on the good side of the boss? Seems like just the opposite would be the case, that the father would be outraged.

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  3. Posted: June 29, 2020In: SciFi

    A young surveyor of planets, for the League of celestial nations, is sentenced to the Planet of Incarceration for entering a restricted area. He must discover why he was directed to the location and who authorised it.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on June 30, 2020 at 2:41 am

    What is the top secret event? (A logline can't reveal or describe all - but it must be specific, not vague. What makes the top secret event of urgent dramatic interest?) Why must he discover why he was set up? IOW: what are the stakes? What is gained if he find out? What is lost is he doesn't?

    What is the top secret event? (A logline can’t reveal or describe all – but it must be specific, not vague. What makes the top secret event of urgent dramatic interest?)

    Why must he discover why he was set up? IOW: what are the stakes? What is gained if he find out? What is lost is he doesn’t?

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