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After an actual demon possesses his wife during rehearsals for a stage version of The Exorcist, a spineless director must fight his demonic spouse to save the cast and crew.
This is a logline for a mockumentary (fake documentary) I'm currently writing - it's aimed at being a contained horror-comedy.
This is a logline for a mockumentary (fake documentary) I’m currently writing – it’s aimed at being a contained horror-comedy.
See lessWhen a mission goes wrong a starship is stranded in the distant future. Lost in a chaotic realm the world weary captain and his inexperienced crew must form allegiances and negotiate deals with other species which will at times severely test their ethics and values.
I like this concept, I think there's a clear engine here for a variety of narratives. I'd love to see your characters introduced in that first line. It might allow you to tighten up the second line too. I think it'd be nice to have a clear understanding of what the stakes are in negotiation, is it sRead more
I like this concept, I think there’s a clear engine here for a variety of narratives. I’d love to see your characters introduced in that first line. It might allow you to tighten up the second line too. I think it’d be nice to have a clear understanding of what the stakes are in negotiation, is it survival? Or something more complex? Is it just their ethics and values that are tested?
See lessChained together by backwoods people, a wanted bank-robber and his hostage must work together to escape and survive through unknown terrain.
The "backwoods people" part of the logline doesn't necessarily relate in any clear way to needing to survive through unknown terrain. The event doesn't clearly correlate with the action taken to correct it. Perhaps it needs to be clarified, why the backwoods people are a threat, because that's alsoRead more
The “backwoods people” part of the logline doesn’t necessarily relate in any clear way to needing to survive through unknown terrain.
The event doesn’t clearly correlate with the action taken to correct it.
Perhaps it needs to be clarified, why the backwoods people are a threat, because that’s also not necessarily a given?
What’s the arc of the protagonist? Could you provide a flaw that indicates the change the protagonist will experience across the story?
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