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In the future, AI is able to determine who has committed a crime, but when it appears to frame a rookie cop of murder, she must out smart a machine thinking 2 steps ahead to prove her innocence.
I'd really like a sense of this cop's inner arc. What does she need to learn in order to prevail at the end? Is there something, some fatal flaw that she needs to overcome or come to terms with, or some critical theme-statement-esque life lesson she's yet to learn that this particular journey will tRead more
I’d really like a sense of this cop’s inner arc. What does she need to learn in order to prevail at the end? Is there something, some fatal flaw that she needs to overcome or come to terms with, or some critical theme-statement-esque life lesson she’s yet to learn that this particular journey will teach her?
See lessHere’s a way you might be able to frame it:
When framed for a murder she didn’t commit, a rookie cop must [[insert arc here]] in order to prove her innocence and overcome the AI that framed her.
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If her antagonist is an AI, it sounds like you might be exploring the instinct/machine, or nature/industry dichotomy that films like Star Wars and the LOTR trilogy.
e.g. When framed for a murder she didn’t commit, a rookie cop must learn to trust her instincts in order to prove her innocence and overcome the AI that framed her.
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Or you might want her to think more like a machine:
e.g. When framed for a murder she didn’t commit, a rookie cop must become a better strategic thinker than the AI that framed her, in order to prove her innocence.
After being transplanted with the arm of a recently executed bandit, a shy and coward farmer must learn how to control his new body part and overcome his cowardice when a violent gang led by the bandit’s vicious brother threaten the town and the woman he loves.
What's the setting both in time and place?
What’s the setting both in time and place?
See lessA group of East London kids embark on a dangerous adventure, following in the footsteps of a Caribbean soldier from WW2, hoping to find the soldier’s hidden treasure and save their estate from demolition
Is this story about a ->brave<- young boy, who when "he learns his East London house estate home is earmarked for demolition" (-)Inciting Incident(-), must "find a soldier's hidden treasure" --> ((character goal driver)); in order to save his home (what's @STAKE!) ...? Trying to "cause andRead more
Is this story about a ->brave<- young boy, who when “he learns his East London house estate home is earmarked for demolition” (-)Inciting Incident(-), must “find a soldier’s hidden treasure” –> ((character goal driver)); in order to save his home (what’s @STAKE!) …?
Trying to “cause and effect” -> ‘must save home’ ++ ‘hidden treasure’ = problem might be resolved ….?
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